CHARACTERISTIC

CHARACTERISTIC

A Poem by dakarai
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The aggregate of features and traits that form the individual nature of some person or thing.

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Creatures of habit have a habit for
Habitual rituals that invent
Artistic alterations with intent;
Rituals that become artistic chores.
Appropriate attitudes create more
Complex complexions that cause an indent,
Tearing through the standards once sweet in scent,
Essentially etched, and set as the core.
Representatives are never restrained
In nature, skillfully displaying sound
Symbolisms that can not be detained.
Traits like these pleased the qualities that bound
Innate intellect to those that remained
Characterized by the truth that they found.

© 2014 dakarai


Author's Note

dakarai
Honest opinions please! (I could really use some help with punctuating the last three lines)

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Honestly, you lost me for a bit.

But, this is really good.

The punctuation for the last three lines: Coma, Period, Period. (:

Posted 5 Years Ago



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dakarai
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Atlanta, GA



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