Your Smile

For everyone that give us a wonderful smile that give a joy to any person's heart

Your smile incites all our
Thoughts to be relaxed within your sight
Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
Worries to be dissolved into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library
Improve our skills in major literary
Expand our essay to a well-read story
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness
Darkness to lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness
Sadness to happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness
Awkwardness to smoothness,

Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith
Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait
Modestly have will power extremely great,

Definitely forget our last defeat
Truly have sensation we never felt
Completely succeed all our tests
Absolutely deserve all our gifts.

Abderrahmane Dakir

Reviews

[Norman T]

So much positive emotion, so many emotive aspects - all derived from one simple action, - a smile.
Perhaps this is why it takes so many facial muscles to perform it.
A beautiful poem that embodies all these factors.

Norman

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[B-poet]

A bright and inspiring testimonial of how a smile can brighten any darkness within our lives. Great work. A solid piece of poetic inspiration. :)

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Sesame]

Indeed a smile is powerful instrument Abderrahmane!

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Robyn]

I enjoyed the positive outlook on it and it truly brought a smile to my face

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[fattycbreezy52]

A beautiful description of a powerful smile

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

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This is beautiful:) Amazing what love can do. Simple things. So simple and so powerful as a smile can change someones life. I enjoyed this. Made my heart smile :) thank you for sharing, dear poet

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Katie]

Love the poem!
It's really an amazing !
Keep up with the great work !😃

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Kurai.Merodi]

Wow, you can feel the love for this person just jumping off the page. I love how you can show what they can do just by giving a smile. A really love-able piece. But the one thing i can criticize it by is the first line of every verse. If you put ":" or ";" at the end of the first line then I think it will flow better and confuse people less, this may be just me but I thought you missed something out there or you accidentally put it on a new line. It may just be me but, in my opinion, I think it will flow better. But Over all a really good poem that is just bursting with love for whoever this person is.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Kurai.Merodi]

Anytime ^w^ Thanks for sharing

[RachelLF]

This is an amazing poem! I did like it. Great job

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.