Please say this isn't real

To touch

to feel

Please say this isn't real

I can hear the memory of your voice

I can feel tears you made me cry

I can't let go of this feeling of regret

like I have this debt that will I will never be free of

this unwavering fear of what isn't real

I write what I can't deny

I can't defy the rules of my entrapment

for I am binded to my truths and

blinded by my heart

 to touch

to feel

Please say this isn't real .

Reviews

[Scott Metro]

Such wishful doubt portrayed well.
A nice thought.


Scott

[Gloria]

Thank you. you always have wonderful things to say and that means a lot to me~

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott....

[Ryan]

I like the line
"I can see the tears you made me cry"
I thought you could maybe change it to
"I can feel the tears you made me cry"
just to add that extra imagery.

[Gloria]

I like that thank you that will sound better ~ :)