Cliques and The Life of A Teen

Cliques and The Life of A Teen

A Poem by Lauren!!

 Exclusive is the word

thats all they really are

rich, conceited, exclusive girls

they ruin those who aren't

and make those who are

they are like a rose

beautiful, absolutely beautiful

but there are always thorns

Rivalry is the word

sibling, sports, and friends

parents like one more

and leave you standing alone

hypocritical, unaware, parents and friends

it's the life of a teen

© 2009 Lauren!!


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I like the words. It's very real, but it's seem to me that it's still in thought form, not poertry form.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Lauren!!
Lauren!!

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