Voices

We all have voices in our heads that try to shatter us

Voices

On this weathered world that  is my mind lies a poison well

That kills whatever pride I have inside of being myself

I try so hard to tell myself to stop putting myself through this hell

But every single time I fail, I have become an empty shell

I am slowly giving in to the poltergeists beneath my skin

The siren's singing inside of my head have weighed me down like lead

These voices never relent

Hungry vultures circle overhead, waiting for my death

These forest fires I've fed have me gasping for every breath

The black widows crawl outside to play with their dying prey

And I pray to god to help me find a way to escape

I am slowly giving in to the poltergeists beneath my skin

The siren's singing inside of my head have weighed me down like lead

These voices never relent

Every single day I play the game of living through today

to tell tomorrow another small part of me died yesterday

With every wicked word they say this current carries me further away

It lays to waste my faith and places me in a state of cold decay

Now here I am, in the wake of a category five grenade hurricane

All that remain are wastelands of rain created by my self-hate

Can somebody save me from this place? I am on the edge, about to break

Erase this pain and replace my shame, these voices won't alleviate

Twinkle, twinkle, little star, slowing fading into the dark

Isolated speck of pale light, such a miserable sight

Twinkle, twinkle, little star, side by side we fade into the dark

I am slowly giving in to the poltergeists beneath my skin

(Worthless, failure, freak of nature)

The siren's singing inside of my head have weighed me down like lead

(Outcast, disaster, pathetic creature)

These voices never relent

Author's Note

This one was a nightmare to post on this website because of all the shenanigans I put in it lol. Tell me if this piece was worth the effort! :)

Reviews

[Cool Girl]

Haha, quick story: so I clicked on this read request without reading who wrote it. Then, I saw the font and color, and imediately thought "Dan."

Anyway, I love it! It was totally worth the effort:)

[DoormanDan]

Ha, it's good to know that people can tell when it's my writing. I'm glad it was worth the effort. Thanks for reviewing :)

[iveltac]

:p everyone here has big voices. " CAN YOU HERE ME?" Lol

[DoormanDan]

wwwwwwwwwwhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttttttttt? Could you repeat? :)

[iveltac]

"im gonna get a SWITCH IF YOU DONT HERE ME. :p

[DoormanDan]

AND I'LL GET A LIGHT BULB if you get a switch :P:P

[Cool Girl]

AND FOR YOUR BIRTHDAYS ILL GET YOU HEARING AIDS :p

[DoormanDan]

YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Cool Girl]

MY POEM IS ON POPULAR WRITING!!!!!!

[iveltac]

"YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH." dID YOU HEAR THAT SUNNY? lOL

[Cool Girl]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

[Cool Girl]

HEAR WHAT NOW???????????

[iveltac]

"SHUTUP GRANDMA" Lol

[Cool Girl]

"OH BE QUIET YOU"

[iveltac]

:p lol......

[Cool Girl]

haha:P....

[DoormanDan]

(Insert random comment)

[Cool Girl]

lol...Good morning, Dan!

[DoormanDan]

Good evening CG!

[Cool Girl]

:) :) Smiley Faces!!!

[iveltac]

Grabbs out a bang gun ans bangs you two.

[DoormanDan]

Ouchy. pain, suffering, burnt toast

[Cool Girl]

hey, that hurt! You can't just hit us all the time! It aint normal....

[iveltac]

grabbs a chair and wacks you two over the head.

[Cool Girl]

"you're mean:( why do u hate me so much!" C.G. says as she clutches her head. lolz

[iveltac]

I smile and drink some more root beer. I lick my lips and fall asleep in a lazy boy recliner.

[Cool Girl]

"He's drunk!" I say to Dan
"He always acts that way," Dan replies

[DoormanDan]

And then a t-rex cam out of nowhere and stomped on Iveltac. Dan and CG winced, before Dan said, "Ooh,thats going to be one nasty hangover".

[Cool Girl]

Haha. You know, you guys are like the best! Most kids I know would get mad if I posted like 24 comments on their writing. I'm glad you two arn't like that. It's so much fun this way!

[DoormanDan]

Yeah it is fun! :)

[Cool Girl]

:) :) Smiley faces!!

[iveltac]

i wake up. i see a dino ontop of me. I hicup. "oh boy am i drunk?" He pulls a shotgun out of his shirt and shoots the dinos head off. He grabbs another rootbeer and drinks it. he soon is asleep again.

[iveltac]

:p so many comments is awsome.

[Cool Girl]

I agree, you drunk maniac :p

[iveltac]

:p... lol...

[Cool Girl]

haha...we really do talk a lot. Look at all the comments!

[iveltac]

:p halelujah more comments plz. " i say as i get up and drink some more root bear. I am addictided.

[Cool Girl]

I grab the root beer out of your hands. "If you end up dying of a root beer addiction, the doctors will have to name a whole new sickness after that. Let's not cause them any more stress. Plus, I really don't think they have any root beer quiting clinics. Let's not have to start one..."

[DoormanDan]

Iveltac shook his head and said one very corny joke, "You know what? you are a real "buzz"kill."

[Cool Girl]

I hand the root beer to Dan so that he can throw it away. "We need to take him to the doctor's" I say to Dan. "But he's so out of it." Dan replies "Than carry him" I say

[iveltac]

I jump from my chair and scurry for the closest wallmart. "ROOT BEERRRRRR." i fall on the concrete unconsis.

[Cool Girl]

"Ugh. We are so going to have to carry him." Dan says
"We? You mean you." I say
Dan picks Iveltac up and carries him to the hospital.

[iveltac]

i wake up in the hospital bed and i leap through the window. I get into the soda machines and you find me on the ground. drunk with root beer all over the floor.

[Cool Girl]

"Okay, he needs to be quarantined..." Dan says
"Or maybe we should lock him up..." he suggests
"I give up, let's all drink root beer and go crazy and travel the world like maniacs"

"Yeah, we could do that too" Dan replies

[iveltac]

I smile and get up. "i drink alot more root beer then start running around the hospital with a empty bottle singing irish songs. and wacking people on the head.

[Cool Girl]

"Okay, I guess we just follow his lead." Dan says
We pick up some root beers, and gulp them down quickly. Then, we start to run around after Iveltac, singing Irish songs and wacking people on the head.

[iveltac]

i smile and pull out a tommy gun. "shoootttttt." I fall on the ground almost dead from root beer. Dan stops drinking root beer. "we need to stop he is gonna die."

[Cool Girl]

"Im totally okay with him dying.."
"Cool Girl!"
"I was kidding..goodness..."

read more"Im totally okay with him dying.."
"Cool Girl!"
"I was kidding..goodness..."

I lean over Iveltac and feel his heart. "It's beating, but slowly."
"Im going to get the doctor." Dan says quietly. While he is gone I sit by Iveltac and whisper things to him. "You'll be alright, You got to be alright. How will we go on without you?"
The doctor comes in and looks at Iveltac on the floor. He carries Iveltac to a hospital bed.
"You two must go." he said, pointing to the exit.
"Nooo," I scream, "We can't leave him."
Dan puts his arms around me as I struggle to break free. I refuse to move to the exit, so Dan carries me out the door xD

[Cool Girl]

Dang it! Did that not go through or something?

[iveltac]

i moan and start glowing root beer color. "give me root beer." I groan.

[iveltac]

:p maybe we should let dan catch up:p.

[Cool Girl]

"Im totally okay with him dying..."
"Cool Girl!"
"I was kidding..goshness.."
I lean over Iveltac and feel his heart. "It's beating, but slowly.."
"I'll go get the doctor.." Dan says quietly. While Dan is gone, I whisper things in Iveltac's ear. "You'll be okay. You got to be okay. How will we go on without you?"
The doctor comes in and looks at Iveltac. He carries him over to a hospital bed.
"Im going to give him medicine that knocks him out for a couple hours. You two must go." he says, pointing to the door.
"Nooo," I scream, "We can't leave him."
Dan puts his arms around me as I struggle to break free. I refuse to move towards the exit, so Dan carries me out the door.

[Cool Girl]

Oops.... idc. If you want we can let him catch up...

[iveltac]

While dan is draggin you away you hear me scream. "GIVE ME ROOT BEAR." "IM ADDICTED."

[iveltac]

The doctor runs out. "he has rootbear aphobia.

[Cool Girl]

I start to cry and mumble " We can't leave him." over and over again...

[iveltac]

Suddenly i burst through the door and several people chase me with tazers. "I WANT ROOT BEEERRR." I say and start wreaking havoc.


Should we let dan catch up?

[Cool Girl]

sure, we can let him catch up... We can continue something else in a message if you want to keep talking, or we could make up something else on the comment stream on the poem about me!

[iveltac]

Hey we aint finished here. :p. i dont care as long as we still do this one. Lol i love it. ROLF.

[Cool Girl]

Me too ROLF! We should make it a short story...

[iveltac]

I am all for it. we just continue here and i will put it all on microsoft word.

[Cool Girl]

okay cool! You're amazing! (virtual hug) xD

[DoormanDan]

I just came on here, and my thing said that I had 22 comments lol :)

[Cool Girl]

Haha, that's your reward for being friends with us:)

[iveltac]

:p merry christmas Dan enjoy the read. :p now you have to comment on it all. lol

[iveltac]

i pull out a knife and grabb Dan. guys with tazers stop chasing me. "if somone doesnt get me a root beer i kill him." Cool girl gets Iveltac a root beer. Iveltac is about to drink it when the doctor runs in. "no dont do it Iveltac. "if you drink one more drop you will probialy die." I opened the lid and throw dan on the floor. I start to put it to my mouth.

[Cool Girl]

I wack the root beer out of Iveltac's hand. "You can't drink it! You are not going to die! You're one of my only friends..." Iveltac suddenly drops the root beer and stares at me, almost as if he is frozen in time. The doctor runs over to him as I kneel next to Dan. "You alright?" I ask
"Yeah, my head hurts a lot though." he responds
"You'll be fine, I promise you."
I help Dan off the ground and then we both turn to Iveltac.
"Im going to have to stick a needle in his armpit," said the doctor
"Okay," I respond. The doctor takes a needle out of his pocket and sticks it under Iveltac's arm. Iveltac screams a high pitched scream as Dan chokes back a laugh. I stare in silence...

[iveltac]

i moan and rip the neddle out of my armpit. "i dont wanna be poke" i say as i eye the root beer on the floor. I leap in the air and jump for the root beer. "ROOT BEER."

[iveltac]

I grabb the root beer and am about to drink it when Dan looks at me. "youll die if you drink that and me and coolgirl wont doo anything." i frown. "so wat i want root beer i say as i slowly lift the bottle. The doctor moans. "if he drinks that who knows what we will have to do."

[Cool Girl]

"Wait," I say, walking towards Iveltac. He stops and turns to face me. "Why do you want the root beer so much? I ask, staring into his eyes, forcing him to meet my gaze.

[iveltac]

and iveltac being drunk from root beer. turned to Dan. "no one cares about me." "you laughed at me for screaming." "now i have fun by myself."
I dash through the hall with rootbeer and several people including Dan who is eating a banana and coolgirl.

[iveltac]

As im running through the hall i turn to Coolgirl.
Becuase i am addictided and i just cant get enough.

[Cool Girl]

"Iveltac wait." I plead. He stops running and turns to face me. "I care, I've always cared."
"No you havn't," he replies. I step forward with tears in my eyes. Then, I give Iveltac a hug. He stands there like an idiot and blushes...
"See? I care."

[iveltac]

I frown and throw the root beer on the ground. "fine no more root beer." I walk to the soda machine and pull a coke out." "COKE." The doctor puts his palm to his face.

[Cool Girl]

"Iveltac, please no more addictions."
"Never," he responds.
"Look at me. Look me in the eyes." He looks me in the eyes and stares.
"Ooh, pretty..." he says in a daze
"Promise me no soda."
"I....I...." he mutters
"Iveltac..."
"Fine, but only because you said so." he shouts.
"Good." I say, smiling up at him.

[iveltac]

I frown. "do i have to see the doctor?" The doctor nodds. "your gonna die if we dont do something.read moreI frown. "do i have to see the doctor?" The doctor nodds. "your gonna die if we dont do something.


ok now we have to do something weird for the surgery or something.

[iveltac]

I frown again as they dragg me into the hospital room. "NO NO NO NO NO I WILL NOT GO IN THERE AND GET STABBED TO DEATH." Coolgirl looks at iveltac. Iveltac smiles. "i said no more soda but i didnt say anything else." Iveltac grabbs a beer and drinks it.

[Cool Girl]

"Ugh. Beer is something he'll really get drunk on." Dan says as the hospital door shuts. "I need to go in with him." I say, opening the door to the room. Iveltacs face is all bandaged up, he has an IV in his vain on his hand, and there's a needle in his stomach.
"What are you doing?" The doctor shouts at me. "
What are YOU doing," i respond.
"I'm preparing to preform surgery." I stand there frozen as I watch Iveltac sit still. Apparently the doctor knocked him out. The doctor got a knife from his pocket and started carving into Iveltac's stomach. I start to cry...
After an hour and a half, the surgery is over. Iveltac looks fine and so does his stomach (oddly). The doctor unwraps the bandages around his head. I scream, "What did you do!"
"I changed his face."
"No No No No. His brown hair... And his brown eyes...and his beautiful completion! It's all gone!"
"Not gone, my dear. Changed."
"But..you can't just give him blond hair and blue eyes and freckles and tell me it's fine! He was beautiful the way he was," i sob...
"He still looks good," the doctor says.
" But, I loved him...."
I cry so hard and run out the door and into Dan's arms. "No," i mumble over and over. Dan puts his arms around me in a loving hug, but I continue to cry. Dan peeks into the hospital room and sees Iveltac's face, then he slowly turns his head and looks down at me. "Shhh..it'll be alright..." He whispers. But he knew everything was different now...

[Cool Girl]

Oops.. That was really long xD

[Cool Girl]

Now we need a bit more drama, then a big adventure!

[Cool Girl]

Let's make Iveltac have another surgery!

[iveltac]

Lol.... i just love it.

[iveltac]

After a couple hours the doctor walks out. "you can see him now im done. But dont wake him up." "and no soda for him for a month!"


Now we have to write about me getting soda or beer and you guys stopping me:p

[Cool Girl]

Okay. And we also have to remember that your face is different! Hahaha....this was one of the best role plays ever! I can't read it without smiling... xD The part about your face changing was really fun to write, even though I wrote it within 5 minutes.... You are like the best virtual friend ever! We also have to keep in mind that my character apparently loves your character. I have no idea why I put that in the story, but it happened, so we have to keep that in mind.

[iveltac]

:p what i look like in real life is blond hair and blue eyes. but no freckles so it wont be hard for me.

The doctor comes out of his office with a paper and hands it to Dan and Coolgirl. "do you want to take care of him at home or put him in a nursying home." "he will act crazy for a month trying to get soda and he wont listen to you and you have to keep watch of him." "so what do you two choose?"

[Cool Girl]

I turn to Dan, my eyes pleading him to let Iveltac come home. Dan knew I loved Iveltac and didn't want to hurt my feelings because I was the closest thing Dan had to a little sister. "We"ll take care of him, thank you." Dan said, taking the paper out of the doctor's hands. I hug Dan and whisper "You're amazing," in his ear. He kissed me lightly on the head in a brother/sister sort of way. The doctor goes into the hospital room and leads Iveltac over to us. Iveltac was really tired because of all the medicine he was given. Dan walked over to him and took his hand. All three of us then exited the hospital, and Dan drove us home. (Let's all live in one house. It makes things easier.)

[iveltac]

Ok lets dan do the next part. And PS i am not my self for the month thats on the doctors papers.

[Cool Girl]

Okay! ..... :)

[iveltac]

:p.........

[DoormanDan]

As they were driving along, Dan sighed in relief, "Whew, today was a day, that's for sure!" He turned to CG and Iveltac, ""I don't think today could've possibly gotten anymore stressful!" At that moment, as if Life was backhanding him, the car engine sputtered and died. Dan tried turning it back on, but then realized what the problem was. He groaned, " Ah, automobiles are so wonderful!" The sarcasm in his voice was explicit, "Technology at it's finest! As a matter of fact, I love cars so much that I just want to take the T in Technology and SHOVE IT UP THE CARS EXHAUST PIPË!"
Before Dan could continue his rant, CG asked, "What's wrong?"
Dan sighed again before responding, "We're out of gas" To this, both CG and Iveltac Sighed.

[Cool Girl]

It was getting dark by then, and it was snowing. They were a few miles from home, and a bit tired. Dan called everyone on his contacts list, but nobody picked up. He then calls the toe truck company..
The soonest they could come was an hour from then. All three of them sat in the car and waited, Iveltac fell asleep. As it got even darker, Cool Girl said "Dan, I'm scared. What if Iveltac never gets better? What if he starts acting up?"
"Hey, everything will be fine. I'm here." Dan whispered back to her, putting his arm around her. Eventually the toe truck came, and they all got home safely...

[iveltac]

They all decided to go to dan's house becuase it was the biggest and it had four bedrooms. Dan and Coolgirl dragged Iveltac to bed while Iveltac mumbled something under his breath. Coolgirl heard something in the middle of the night. She got up and knocked on Dans door. Dan anwsered it. "what is that sound?" Dan groaned. "Its Iveltac running around the house." They ran into the living room to find Iveltac singing random pop songs and acting crazy.

[Cool Girl]

"The doctor warned us about this," Dan said as he rubbed the sleep out of his eyes.
"What should we do?" Cool Girl asks
"We have to find a way to control him."
"Yeah, and how do we do that, Einstein?"
"I don't know. Let me try to handle this one," Dan said as he started towards Iveltac.

"AND YOUR GONNA HERE ME (random pause and Iveltac burps) ROAR!!!" Iveltac's singing was so out of tune and so loud that it hurt Dan's ears. Dan was expecting to get complaints from the neighbors xD
" Iveltac, it's two in the morning, you need to go back to bed."
"KISS ME LIKE YOU WANT TO BE LOVED" Iveltac continued to scream and run around the house blowing kisses. Dan chased after him as Cool Girl stood near the staircase.
"Iveltac, get over here!" Dan yelled
"I CANT HEAR YOU! EYE EYE CAPTAIN! OOHH...WHO LIVES IN A PINEAPPLE UNDER THE SEA..."
After running around the house 8 times, Iveltac suddenly stopped and dropped to the floor.
"What just happened," asked Cool Girl
"Like I have any idea.." Dan responded. Iveltac was breathing, and was obviously passed out.
" I need you to help me carry him," Dan said slowly. Cool Girl looked suprised but didnt refuse.
"I'll take the feet, you get the arms..." she whispered.

[Cool Girl]

Oops, that was really long xD

[iveltac]

:p i loved it though. lol

[iveltac]

Dan got the doctor to come and check iveltac.
"Well it looks like he was running around to much and just passed out."
"Or he could of gotten rootbeer."
The doctor headed towards the door but stopped and turned towards Dan.
"Rootbeer wont kill him but i would not let him get to much or he will go in a cooma."
"And not just any cooma."

[Cool Girl]

Haha. WE'VE SUCCESSFULLY COMMENTED 93 TIMES!!

[Cool Girl]

"What kind of comma then..?" Dan asked.
"A comma that will change his memories and mix them up. It would be almost impossible to restore the memories properly." the doctor stated

Dan knew how much Cool Girl cared for Iveltac. "No root beer for him then," Dan said as he looked at Cool Girl who was standing in the hallway. Then, the doctor left the house, the door closing behind him...

[Cool Girl]

I meant to write cooma but instead wrote comma xD

[Cool Girl]

You know, I can't spell xD

[DoormanDan]

Dan sighed, and ruffled his hair while he was thinking. After about a minute, he walked over to CG, and told her what the doctor had told him about Iveltacs condition.

[Cool Girl]

When Dan finished speaking,he could tell that Cool Girl was worried. Dan put his arm around her and said, "Hey, it's fine. He'll be fine." Cool Girl smiled weakly at Dan. "Thanks for being here for me, Dan," she said, "You're like the older brother to me." Dan blushed and smiled back at her, thinking about all they'd been through together...

[iveltac]

Iveltac was no longer singing now and The doctor and the doctor had ducktaped him to his bed.

CG and Dan sighed as the doctor walked out of the house. All night CG and Dan heard Iveltac yelling for Rootbeer so Dan and CG just got up and watched a movie realy loud as Iveltac hollared his head off.

[Cool Girl]

"This is going to be a long month." Dan said
"No kidding." Cool Girl responded.
"I know you like him..." Dan whispered. Cool Girl blushed, then laughed.
"Yeah well, it's not like you havn't liked anyone.." she responded

Dan and Cool Girl looked at each other for a moment.
"I never realized how mean I've been until now." Cool Girl said
"Mean? Your not mean."
"Yes I was because I never really thought about how much I need you two."
"We'll get through this." Dan said quietly.
"But what if we dont," Cool Girl said, her eyes tearing up. "What if Iveltac loses his memories? What if he dies? What will we do then?"
"Come here," Dan said, puting his arm around Cool Girl. She leaned on his shoulder, and together they watched tv all through the night.

[Cool Girl]

Ummm guys? You gonna add anything to it?

[iveltac]

They wake up to the sound of Iveltac screaming for Rootbeer. Dan sits up

"He's at it again." Cg chuckles.

Dan walked into his room and grabbed a dog leash a thick one.
Dan attached it to Iveltacs belt then unstraped him from his bed.

Iveltac jumped from where he was and tugged on the leash. Cg and Dan smiled.

"I think this will work." Dan announced.
but that split secound iveltac slipped out of his pants and went flying through the window.

[iveltac]

Lol best reply yet :p and the weirdest.

[Cool Girl]

That's interesting... So, I'm guessing that Iveltac is now running around in his undies?

[iveltac]

:p i guess so.

[Cool Girl]

Lol........

[DoormanDan]

Dan just stood there for a moment, not knowing what to say about what just happened. After a minute, he groaned loudly in absolute frustration, before yelling, ÄAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Meanwhile, CG just watched the usually calm, collected boy lose his cool, trying her best not to laugh.

[Cool Girl]

Dan continued to make odd noises until...
"Hold yourself together, Man! You are the oldest, only I am allowed to scream like a child!! C.G yelled. Dan stopped his rant, grabbed his coat, and ran out the door. C.G. followed as quickly as she could. She could see Iveltac running down the street in his Sponge Bob underpants. The weird part was that everyone outside just continued with their work without even giving him a glance.

[iveltac]

Iveltac ran for ever with an occasional breaking into someones house and looking for soda. iveltac walked out of a house door to find Dan with hand cuffs. Iveltac shook his head and pushed Dan on the ground. CG who was very kind to Iveltac was angry with him becuase he pushed Dan over. Cg pulled out a tazer that the doctor had given her and shot it into Iveltac. Iveltac did the irish jig in his underwear then fell over. :p

[Cool Girl]

I tried to keep a straight face while reading that......EPIC FAIL xD

[iveltac]

:p lol now its your turn.

[Cool Girl]

C.G. helped Dan get up, then she looked at Iveltac. "This will be a good story to tell your children someday." She said to Dan
"Oh yes indeed," Dan chuckled. They stared at Iveltac for a few minutes. They both knew that the end of the month was far away. "What will we do with him?" C.G. asked
"Let's get him back home," Dan suggested.
C.G. admired Dan and how grown up he was. It made her sad realizing that the guy she'd known since pre school was getting older and was becoming more mature. She looked back down at Iveltac, her crush. She hated the stupid doctor for changing his beautiful face! But Iveltac looked good with blond hair and blue eyes and a few freckles. She still loved his personality, but she knew he'd never like her back. Dan began to carry Iveltac like a baby. He then started walking back towards the house.
C.G. followed in absolute silence.....

[iveltac]

The whole way home. Iveltac made strange noises with his mouth and was sucking his thumb like a baby. Cg thought it weird but it might be becuase Dan was holding him like a baby. When they got home Dan set Iveltac on the couch and went to his room to get hand cuffs. Thats when Iveltac awokeand CG sat right ontop of him to keep him from moving. Iveltac wasnt his normal self. for the past year he had the rootbeer desieas and wasnt like the old Iveltac. But CG hoped that after the month was over the real Iveltac would be back and Know her again. When he got the desiese he thought about nothing but rootbeer and even forgot who Dan was.

[Cool Girl]

That's so sad... :(

[iveltac]

:p how maybe hes faking. Lol

[iveltac]

Im joking yepp its sad he is preaty much not him until the end of the month. but at the end of the month he is not rootbeer crazy anymore hes like me just pure Crazy.

[Cool Girl]

xD good!! :)

[iveltac]

:_) lol yepp

[Cool Girl]

Dan later brung in the hand cuffs and hand cuffed Iveltac to the sofa. "Are you alright?" Dan asked C.G. when he saw her staring out the window. "He doesn't know who we are anymore," she said softly. Dan didn't like to talk about it. He was scared just like she was, but he was older. He wanted to be there to comfort her and give her hope, but he was losing hope himself. C.G. turned away from the window and walked down the hall to her bedroom. She sat on her bed, curled up into a ball, and cried. A few minutes later, there was a knock on her bedroom door. "CG, can I come in?" Dan asked as he turned the know. He walked slowly over to her bed where she was. "CG..." he started, but stopped as he sat next to her. Dan put his ran around CG and she leaned her head against his chest. Dan tried his best to comfort her, but a tear went down his face. "Hey, look what you've done. Now I'm crying too," Dan said. CG looked up at him and laughed quietly. Dan felt better knowing that they had each other always and forever. The two sat there together for a while and enjoyed each other's presence...

[iveltac]

They stopped crying when they heard Iveltac trying to pry lose the handcuffs with a butcher knife from the kitchen. Dan and CG lept from the bed and dashed towards the kitchen.

Iveltac hid the knife and lept onto the couch. He sat on the remote which turned spongebob on. Iveltac grinned. Dan walked in. "What are you doing?" Iveltac grinned and pulled the remote out from under him "Im watching tv." Dan grinned. "And thats why you were sitting on the remote?" Cg laughed. Iveltac smiled and nodded.

[Cool Girl]

This is like an amazing role play!! xD

[iveltac]

:p yepp im making a book thats for sure.

[iveltac]

lol........

[Cool Girl]

Lol!!! xD
....

[DoormanDan]

This is a great role play! :)

[Cool Girl]

We know, Dan. We know xD
HAHAHAHA

[DoormanDan]

I know you know. I just wanted to state it again because MY NAME IS CAPTAIN OBVIOUS! I AM A CAPTAIN! :)

[Cool Girl]

Haha. That made me laugh XD
We missed you today Dan!!

[iveltac]

:p yepp we did. Dan is the man even if he drives a van. Rolf. best joke ever. ok so who is gonna post next :p i love dis roleplay.

[Cool Girl]

Me too! How about u, smarty pants. Wanna post next?

[iveltac]

:p i posted last. cool girl was a swirl until her temper went whirl. :p lol

[Cool Girl]

XD well then Dan can post...

[iveltac]

:p ok ......

[iveltac]

'Ahhhhh DAN POST IM GETTING BORED.

[Cool Girl]

XD..........

[iveltac]

LOL..................

[Cool Girl]

I missed u

[iveltac]

Me too. Give Coolgirl virtual hug.

[Cool Girl]

Haha (virtually hug Iveltac) xD

[iveltac]

starts dancing and drinking rootbeer while i wait for dan. :p a roleplay inbetween a roleplay.

[Cool Girl]

Yes! We just made a new invention. The impossible has now been made possible!!

[iveltac]

:p...........

[Cool Girl]

Take the 16 personalities test and tell me ur result!!!

[iveltac]

Send me the link.

[Cool Girl]

http://www.16personalities.com/free-personality-test

[iveltac]

ok................

[iveltac]

im ENTP.... what does that mean?

[Cool Girl]

An odd juxtaposition arises with ENTPs, as they are uncompromisingly honest, but will argue tirelessly for something they don't actually believe in, stepping into another's shoes to argue a truth from another perspective. And apparently they are good at being romantic xD

[Cool Girl]

They are very curious and are good thinkers:)

[DoormanDan]

When Dan saw that Iveltac was watching spongebob, he sweatdropped. "um...aren't you a little to old for-"Before he could finish, Iveltac roared,
"DON'T TELL ME HOW TO LIVE MY LIFE BOY!!!!!!!!" The roar was so powerful that the shockwave sent Dan flying back into the wall. "ow! How's that even possible?!" Dan winced, rubbing his poor back. Sorry I haven't been on all day, my internet was down. :)

[iveltac]

Its ok. And Coolgirl most of that is true other than romantice. Actualy i dont know never had a gf cuase im homeschooled. But i might be romantice. :p i kiss my dog is that romatice? LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL my mom says im romaantice. :p Nvm om word so hard to say.

[Cool Girl]

That made me laugh really hard.. xD
Is kissing your dog romantic... Wow, never really thought about that. It really depends. Is it one of those "You're the cutest thing I've ever seen" kiss, or one of those passionate ones with lots of doggie saliva.. xD okay, I just made myself laugh.
Maybe you are romantic, or maybe your mom's a liar. Well actually, she probs isn't a liar. I'm guessing she's the one who teaches you. She must be nice to be able to deal with you all day... jk jk
You're still crazy though xD
You don't need a gf anyway.. Dan is here to make you smile!! HAHAHA
Dan is nice enough. He's a good guy, friend, virtual friend, fake virtual sibling, role player, etc. And he must be crazy since he's hanging out with us xD


We missed you, Dan. Ready for that snow storm?? Or does it not hit your state..
I don't think it hits Iveltac's state..

[iveltac]

Lol nope im in Ks. Yepp im romantic now i can vouce for that. :p just dont like admiting it. Kisses Dan on the cheek. :p JK not gay. Kisses Coolgirl on the cheek then blushes. My cheeks look like blood.

[iveltac]

Man we hit a hard subject.

[iveltac]

:p.............

[Cool Girl]

xD you just virtually kissed me on the cheek LOL

[DoormanDan]

The snowstorms hit me(I live in Delaware) and I dont have to go to school today....YYYYYYEEEEEEEEHHHHHHAAAAAAWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!

[DoormanDan]

And eewwie! Ive got virtual cooties now lol :)

[Cool Girl]

I have to go to school:(
The storm hit us (i live in pennsylvania) but my stupid school didn't close!!!!

Haha, I have cooties too. XD

[Cool Girl]

Dan and Iveltac later went out for a walk. CG stayed home and started to bake cookies. As she set them on the windowsill to cool down, something strange happened. The old lady from next door was at the window and was holding a basket of apples. "Hello dear, want an apple?" she said in an old squeaky voice.
"WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU DOING!! I AINT SNOW WHITE!! MY COMPLECTION IS NOT AS WHITE AS SNOW, THOUGH I DO HAVE PRETTY EYES AND MIGHT BE FAIREST OF THE LAND. I DONT KNOW! WHY DONT YOU GO ASK THE MIRROR!" CG started to yell at the creepy lady.
"Come on, dear. Take the apple." the lady said
"I AINT STUPID. EVERYONE KNOWS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU EAT THE APPLE. NOBODY'S GONNA FALL FOR THAT TRICK!" CG yelled back

As if on cue, Iveltac came running through the door. "APPLE," he screamed. Before CG could stop him, Iveltac took a big bite of the apple and fell to the floor. CG turned towards the windowsill, but the old lady was gone. CG looked back at the floor where Iveltac was. She kneeled down beside Iveltac and didn't know what to do. She sat there shouting Dan's name, hoping that he would come.

After a while, Dan came and CG explained what had happened. "How will we fix this?" CG asked
"True loves kiss fixes everything," Dan said.
"Right. Like in the movie! Now all we need to do is find Iveltac's true love." CG said
"This is gonna be hard," Dan said, "Maybe we should start with that girl in Iveltac's class."
"Okay, let's go!" CG said as they started to gather their things. She hoped everything would be okay.

[Cool Girl]

Oops, that was long xD

[iveltac]

Omy Hides in embaresment. Lolll i read this and i knew that was coming. Oh boy now i have to kiss someone.

And PS this is gonna make a great book. :p

Ok i aint doing this next chapter. :p Love storys aint for me. Expecily when they are about me. Walks over to the window. "DAN ITS YOUR TURN" I yell.

[iveltac]

"DAN COME SAVE ME." :ppp

[Cool Girl]

xD hahahahhahahaa

[Cool Girl]

You can't do the next chapter anyway because you're like dead sorta like Snow White!

[Cool Girl]

Yeah it will make a good book!!

Love stories xD xD xD
You're good at them. For goodness sake, you already virtually kissed Dan and I xD

[iveltac]

Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwww

[Cool Girl]

It's your fault xD

[iveltac]

:p lol.......

[iveltac]

That was on accident. :p i say while blushing.

[DoormanDan]

I've just realized this poem has close to 400 views; I honestly did not expect this poem to get that many views(but all I have to say is YYYYYYAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!)

[iveltac]

Its becuase of us people come to see us roleplay. JK

[DoormanDan]

I wonder what's going through their minds as they see a review that has 177 more replies lol :)

[Cool Girl]

xD I love this role play! I also luv u guys! I love how Dan doesn't get made at us for commenting on his poem so much! XD

[Cool Girl]

oh. I also love how you guys are fun. A lot of older kids (like Dan) are boring and too mature and dont have fun. You both are funny and pretty easy going:) I love that about you guys xD

[DoormanDan]

This is fun. I dont like being boring and normal. I prefer to be fun and weird and be all like 4 + 4 = BILL CLINTONS SHOE LACES JUST BECAUSE I DONT GIVE A CHICKEN NUGGET ABOUT MAKING SENSE!!! :)

[Cool Girl]

xD I LOVE CHICKEN NUGGETS!!!!! AND FOOD IN GENERAL!!!

[DoormanDan]

I dont even know how I would react if I met somebody who said, "I dont like food" WWWWWWHHHHHAAAAAAATTTTTT??????««¥){{{}5"?8_£¥€

[Cool Girl]

XD I'd be like speachless and would be doing big hand motions and would be like pacing and moving my mouth and it would look weird because no words would come out.

[iveltac]

:p... Speechless. Lol ok so whos gonna do next chapter. :p it turned from root beer crazy to iveltac and the kiss of life. :ppppp

[Cool Girl]

xD well, I guess Dan and I will do it since you dont want to...

[Cool Girl]

Dan and CG ran down the street to the girl's house. CG rang the doorbell twice before the girl answered. "Hi Maura!" CG said reaching in for a hug
"CG!!!!" the girl screamed with excitement
"Maura, we need your help."
"Oh, what for?" Maura asked
"Kissing Iveltac..." CG said

Maura looked so surprised, but didn't argue. All three of them went back to Dan's house where Iveltac was lying on the floor.
"So I have to kiss him?" Maura asked
"Yepper doodles!" Dan responded
"Okay," Maura said. "This will be interesting."

Maura knelt over Iveltac and kissed his lips.
"It's not working!" She said as she kissed him again. After 10 more kisses, Dan told Maura that she could leave. CG appreciated that because she was about to throw up. She hated seeing Maura, that annoying girly girl, kiss her crush. After Maura left, CG and Dan sat on the sofa.
"What will we do now?" Dan asked
"I have no idea," CG responded.

[iveltac]

:pppp.......... oh boy

[Cool Girl]

XD xD XD xD XD xD XD

[iveltac]

XDDDDDDDDDDDDD Iveltac jumps up and yawns. Must have been breakfast that made me tired. :p

[iveltac]

Why was that girl kisssing me iveltac asks. :p

[Cool Girl]

"Ummm," Dan says, "We thought you were poisoned.."

[iveltac]

Iveltac wipes his face with a hanky chif. Man why is my face covered in lipstick he asks.

[iveltac]

Dan thought it strange how iveltac was acting. Dan ran into his room and grabbed a rootbeer. He brought it to Iveltac. "WAnt it? Iveltac shook his head

[iveltac]

CG danced in joy and leaned over and kissed Iveltac. Iveltac frowned and fell off the couch. Dan smield. Well now back to the doctor. Iveltac frowned what have i been doing for years?

[Cool Girl]

"Ugh" CG said as the three went out the door to the doctors office. Dan was carrying Iveltac like a sack of potatoes.

[iveltac]

Iveltac didn't even remember how to walk.

[Cool Girl]

"I can't..I can't believe he doesn't remember anything..." CG said
"Not even us," Dan added.read more"I can't..I can't believe he doesn't remember anything..." CG said
"Not even us," Dan added.
"There's got to be a way to fix this," the doctor said as he walked around in frustration.
CG took a deep breath and walked out of the room and into the hallway. Then, she sat down in the corner and covered her face with her hands. About a half an hour later, Dan came out to get a water bottle from the vending machine. CG took an exaggerated breath so that Dan would notice her. Dan turned around and walked over to where she sat on the floor.
"Are you okay?" Dan asked
"What do you think," CG said but she didn't lift her head up.
"It'll be fine." Dan said
"No it won't! All those other times you said it would be fine, but it's not!" She responded
"CG....."
"Just go away.. You didn't even notice that a I left the room! I had to make a noise just for you to come over!" CG shouted as she lifted her face. It was red and puffy from crying.
"I won't leave you.." Dan said
"Well, I'm not staying." CG said as she jumped up and ran out of the hospital as fast as she could.
Dan stood astonished and worried at the same time...

[iveltac]

Ok DAN your turn. :p

[Cool Girl]

My part was so dramatic!!! I loved it!!!! LOL xD

[iveltac]

:p...............

[Cool Girl]

IVELTAC!!! I MISSED U!!

[iveltac]

Ahh i say as i runn off. :p

[Cool Girl]

Hahahaha. I love this so much! It's like a whole different world being on here. Reminds me of the song Fourth of July by Fall Out Boy xD

[DoormanDan]

Fall Out Boy is AWESOME! And by the way, nice profile picture CG :)

[Cool Girl]

IKR!!! And thank you:)

[iveltac]

:p that pic will be awsome. FOR CENTURYS. Yeah yeah yeah yeah. :p dorky when it comes to singing.

Dan u gonna go? Im dieing here. :p make them go our for pizza or something.

[Cool Girl]

I'm already dead... xD
My profile pic is so ugly! Im ugly LOL

[DoormanDan]

Aw, don't say that. You are not ugly at all :)

[DoormanDan]

The serious moment was shattered when suddenly, out of nowhere, a strange figure just appeared out of nowhere. Dan and CG didn't even have time to ask who this person was before he spoke, "I think I might be able to help you out." He had one heck of a deep voice.

CG whispered to Dan, "Um...do you know who this guy is?"

Dan shook his head and whispered back, "No idea whatsoever. But he did just say he could help us out, and that deep voice of his shouts, 'I'm trustworthy' ". Dan finally spoke to the mysterious man, "You can? And how, may I ask?"

[Cool Girl]

Awe thanks, Dan! Iveltac can comment next:)

[iveltac]

:p i dont even know what Dan had in mind.

The man smirked. "Im trying to become a brain surgen so i need test patiants to see if i can do it." CG's eyes widdened. "Dan dont let him mess his brain up more." The man frowned. "Fine we can do my brain regenerating process which will approcimantly take about 3 weeks.

[iveltac]

CG's turn..

[Cool Girl]

"Should we do it, Dan?" CG asked
"Well, I think we should.." Dan responded
Dan put both arms around CG "Let me talk to the man," he said
CG waited while Dan and the man went into a separate room to talk.

[Cool Girl]

Imagine us 3 as siblings xD
I can picture us running around the house with foam swords and chasing after each other :p

[DoormanDan]

And knowing my luck I would be the one who would somehow manage to break a TV with my foam sword :)

[Cool Girl]

xD xD xD I wuv u, Dan xD xD xD

[Cool Girl]

I wanna fly like Katy Perry at half time!

[iveltac]

? skipped half time they usualy have a bunch of junk. Yeah patriots. Knew they could do it. lol Dans turn again. and if i ahve a foam sword i woulf probialy be the one to start using my fist or break mine over Dans head.

[Cool Girl]

I'd probably end up hitting Iveltac with my foam sword because he hit Dan xD
Sword fight! LOL

[iveltac]

Then id pick the couch up and set it and CG.

[Cool Girl]

That would be mean... xD

[iveltac]

:p so what im a teenager im mean. And im crazy with rootbeer. Ok lets get back to that story

[Cool Girl]

No excuses! xD
Okay, it's your turn:)

[iveltac]

Dan and Cg soon came out of the room. They had decided to let the man try and regenerate Iveltacs brain. Dan dragged Iveltac to the doctors van. When the car got on the road the supposive doctor smiled an evil smile. Suddenly Dan got a text that said the following. You want Iveltac back u are going to have to do something for me. CG frowned. "Not on my watch" She said. Before Dan could blink an eye Cg was in the van driving after the doctor.

[DoormanDan]

Dan just stood in the dust of CG's van, watching her drive away. The dust from the vehicle made him go into a coughing fit for a good minute. Once the dust cleared away, and his coughing died down, he sighed, and begin mumbling to himself like John Mclaine from the diehard movies(only in more kid friendly language, thankfully). After a few seconds of rambling, he sighed once again, and said, "Really? Will this madness just end already?!"

[Cool Girl]

Haha this is getting interesting...

As CG drove, the traffic light turned red. The doctor stopped in front of it and CG was right behind him! She opened the sky roof and jumped onto the roof of the doctors van.. Then, she spotted Iveltac through the window and.....

[iveltac]

She lept for the window. Suddenly the van started driving leaving CG on the ground. Iveltac frowned and yelled. "Good try CG." Suddenly Cg smiled. "He remembers my name." Cg was angry now. "

They cant take him now." She pulled a pistol out of her hand bag she was carrying. She aimed at the Vans tires and shot. Suddenly a car went zooming from the left. The car suddenly crashed into a warehouse. Cg smirked. "Sorry" She yelled. She quickly got back in Dans car and started chasing the van again. Suddenly up ahead she saw a big motorcycle. The guy on the motor cycle wore a mask and was holding a minigun. Suddenly the Vans tires were gone. CG got out of the car and ran for the van. The man pulled off his mask. It was Dan!

[iveltac]

There just made it slightly more intresting. Lol now all we need is the people in the van to use a teleporter and take Me with them. :ppppp. suddenly a weird book turned to an action and adventure.

[Cool Girl]

Hahaha, I love this book so much! It's very interesting and has so many plot twists xD

[iveltac]

:p you can say that again.

[Cool Girl]

Okay! Hahaha, I love this book so much! It's very interesting and has so many plot twists xD

Lololol

[iveltac]

:p...............

[iveltac]

you can say that again.

[Cool Girl]

Yeah.. No xD

[iveltac]

:p why?...... :))))

[iveltac]

:p ok whos going to comment next.

[Cool Girl]

Dan can! (I'm too lazy xD)

[iveltac]

ok. :p 239 replys

[Cool Girl]

#JACKPOT!!!
Lolol

[iveltac]

:p not until we reach 250. lol DAN WHER ARE YOU, "WE aRE SPAMING UR STORY U BETTER STOP US" Lol

[Cool Girl]

hahahahahah

[iveltac]

:p........

[Cool Girl]

Dan is hiding from us xD

[DoormanDan]

IIIIIIIIIIIMMMMMAAAAA BBBBBBBAAAAAAACCCCCCKKKKKK!!!!!! Sorry I wasnt on yesterday. It was a busy day :)

[iveltac]

:p ok now its ur turn to read a bunch of junk :pppp. now post dan post. Lol

[iveltac]

pulls out whip. "must make excuse to get to 250 replys.

[iveltac]

starts whipping dan. "Work"

[iveltac]

CG coems out of nowhere in a spaceship. "Stop" she yells.

[iveltac]

Yesh made it. :p

[Cool Girl]

JACKPOT!!!

[iveltac]

Yeah now before dan gets back reach 300 :p

[Cool Girl]

Yeah!!! Let's do dis!

[DoormanDan]

Sorry, no 300 before I get back for you :P

[Cool Girl]

Dan! You evil spider clown! How dare you ruin our plan xD

[DoormanDan]

Urm.. it's spider MIME, thank you very much lol.

[Cool Girl]

Lol Dan!!!!!!!!!! I MISSED YOU!!!!!!!!!! WE HAD TO PAUSE OUR DORK REUNION:(

[DoormanDan]

Haha sorry. My life has been getting busier and busier lately :€)

[Cool Girl]

I forgive you xD

[iveltac]

:p how dare you abuse us and leave us to be naughty and spam peoples review :pp. "daddydoorman." Lol hey Dan its ur turn to write a chap.

[DoormanDan]

Dan was driving head on at the van. Closer and closer they got until "Crash!" Dan collided with the van, and was sent flying over it. As he slammed into the ground, he went into a roll, and came to a stop, groaning in pain.

Meanwhile, the driver of the van had lost control because of the impact, and was desperately trying to regain control. After a few moments of swerving, the van flipped over onto its side and skidded across the road for about 12 feet. It finally came to a stop on the edge of a sidewalk.

Moaning still, Dan slowly rose to his feet. He was scratched and bruised, but he seemed alright for the most part. "Yipekiya-owowow..." He winced as the pain prevented him from finishing the sentence. Sighing, he made sure his minigun was loaded, and limped over to flipped over van.

[iveltac]

:p awsome i forgot where you got the mingun though? lol :p

i completly forgot where we were in this story its been so many replys since we did it.:p

[Cool Girl]

Dan slowly walks up to the van, while CG pops up out of nowhere and follows him. "Iveltac!" they both repeatedly called, but there was no response. CG ran over to the crashed car and started picking through the rubble. "Iveltac!" she screamed when she saw him lying under the broken engine. "Dan, help me!" she called, and they both lifted the engine and put it to the side. Iveltac's face had blood smeared on it, and his leg had a long cut running down it. CG put her hand over his heart to see if he was still breathing. She could feel the slow beats of his heart, then she shook him to try and wake him up. She continued to shake him until she saw his bright blue eyes staring up at her. "Hey! Looks like I've gotten a bit banged up," Iveltac said. CG was speechless as she looked at him all bruised up, but still flashing that troublesome grin. She reached down and hugged him. "I thought you were dead.. You were just lying there a moment ago dead..." she said between tears.
"Well, I'm alive now." Iveltac whispered to her quietly. CG stayed there for a few moments until she heard... "Ahhhhhhhhhh" CG turned to where Dan stood with a sword going through him. Next to Dan stood the evil man laughing wildly. "NO NO NO!!!!!" She yelled as she ran over to Dan who had pulled the sword out of himself. Dan had fallen on the pavement and there was blood oozing out of his stomach. CG kneeled beside him and started to press on the wound. Dan lay there struggling and screaming in pain....

[iveltac]

Ivekac jumped up in surprise. "I remember who I was." He looked around. "Dan CG is that you? I've missed Dan's annoying singing voice and how CG used to dance." Suddenly Iveltac spotted dan and the evil man. Iveltac growled and leapt onto he man. He start punching the man over and over until his whole face was a big scar. The man jumped up and shot iveltac in the shoulder. He smiled and ran off. The lat thing Iveltac heard before he went unconsius was CG crying over Dan.

[Cool Girl]

"Dang it, dang it, dang it!!" CG said as she looked over at Iveltac. She wouldve chased down the man, but she had to keep pressing on Dan's wound before he lost too much blood. There was only one of her, and there were two people she needed to help. She had to check on Iveltac, so she placed Dan's hand over his wound. She thought it would be heavy enough to hold the wound for a couple minutes. She ran over to Iveltac. His shoulder was bleeding and he was unconscious. The wound wasn't as bad as Dan's. CG ripped a piece of cloth off of Iveltac's shirt and used it as a bandage to cover his wound. Then, she went back to Dan. She placed her hand over Dan'a heart, and couldn't feel a beat. She lifted her blood stained hand and pushed on the wound as fast as she could. "Please work.." She mumble over and over again as she tried not to let Dan lose too much blood. She felt his heart over and over again, but still no beat could be felt. "Come on, Dan. For me? Wake up for me!"

[iveltac]

Suddenly Dan dies and iveltac sits up laughing. jK dan its ur turn.

[Cool Girl]

Haha you scared me there for a second! xD

[iveltac]

Lol awsome

[Cool Girl]

Hahahahahahahahaha

[Cool Girl]

Awe
Is the adventure over?
Has the story ended?
My dear friends, with end comes new beginning.
A new chapter shall unfold :)

[iveltac]

This ain't over yet its fans turn' Dans

[Cool Girl]

Hey!! I missed you! We haven't talked in like forever!! xD

[DoormanDan]

"Hahahaha!" Iveltac went on laughing for several moments before finally coming(somewhat) to his senses. "Wait, where-" That was when he saw sitting on the ground crying right next to Dan's body/ He narrowed his eyes, "Uh....what happened?" He asked.

[Cool Girl]

"Dan got stabbed.." CG managed to say between tears. "He's not responding!! I tried everything!!" read more"Dan got stabbed.." CG managed to say between tears. "He's not responding!! I tried everything!!"
"Did you try CPR?" Iveltac asked.
"No," CG admitted.
"Well let's do it then!" Iveltac responded.
"Alright, you try."
"I don't know how the heck to give CPR!!!"
"Ugh fine I'll do it," CG stated. She bent down over Dan and gave him CPR. Blow, press, blow, press..
She repeated this process over and over until she concluded that it wouldn't help. It was too late to help. CG looked at Dan's motionless body as she cried. She picked up his cold hand and held it against her heart. Then, she began to whisper to him as she recalled all their past memories. "Remember that time you went to school in your PJs? Oh, and that time you had to dress up as a princess for Halloween because I forced you to? Why did you have to go, Dan? You promised you'd never leave me, and you promised to never break a promise." CG hugged Dan and held him tight as she wept and shed what seamed like a thousand tears. After ten minutes, Iveltac said, "We should go." He tried to pick her up off of Dan, but CG refused to move. "I won't leave him!!" she screamed.
"CG..."
"No!! He's my best friend, I won't leave him!!" CG screamed in terror as she held Dan tighter. She began yelling at Dan for leaving. "Curse this stupid day! I hate you, Dan! Best friends are supposed to always be there for one another, and you're not here anymore!"
"CG, I know you don't mean any of that." Iveltac said
"Shut up! If you hadn't gone crazy, this wouldn't have happened." CG looked up at Iveltac in anger and frustration. She could see a tiny tear run down his cheek. She wanted to apologize, but before she found the words, he had turned away..

[DoormanDan]

My cheese boloney sandwich, this got heavy REALLY fast :)

[Cool Girl]

Ikr!! I love it xD
Hey, Dan!! I've missed you :)

[iveltac]

Iveltac stood up and touched his side. It was covered in blood. He frowned And walked over to Dan. its just a flesh wound iveltac exclaimed. Iveltac shoved his foot into Dans stomach. Suddenly Dans eyes opened and he jumped up screaming in pain. Dan exclaimed.

[Cool Girl]

Hahahaha

"Ewwww gross!!!!!" Dan shouted when he saw Iveltac's food stuck inside his stomach.
"Dan!!!" CG yelled. "Don't you ever scare me like that again!"
"I'll try not to," Dan said as he gave CG a hug. "Is Iveltac's memory back?" He asked..

[iveltac]

CG frowned. "Yepp it is and i completely forgot how i hated him some times." Iveltac grinned and pulled his foot out of Dan.

"CG Dan needs operation now." A car stopped next to them. Iveltac opened the doors and pulled the driver out of the car. CG loaded Dan and herself into the back of the car. It was a ferraria. Everyone was loaded when Iveltac spotted the evil doctor drivin towards them in a semi.

Iveltac frowned and turned the car on he sped off just as the semi missed them. Iveltac shoved his foot into the gas pedal as the semi gained speed so did the ferraria.

[Cool Girl]

I'm really beginning to hate that evil doctor.. xD

[iveltac]

Lol who isnt. Lol that would be funny if Dan had like thousands of veiws on this becuase of our roleplay.

Ok Dan or CG Your turn.

[Cool Girl]

That would indeed be funny...

[iveltac]

Ok so whos going Dan or you?

[Cool Girl]

Dan can go

[iveltac]

Ok Lets yell at him till he gets here. :p right when we have a party he alwats breaks it up.

[Cool Girl]

Good idea!!! ITS PARTY TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[iveltac]

Woot if Dan takes to long we will reach 300 replies. I hope he doesnt go mad.

[Cool Girl]

Dan's too nice to get mad xD

[iveltac]

Lol..............

[Cool Girl]

Dan is so funny

[iveltac]

:p if hes funny then he can be mad.

[Cool Girl]

lol
Gosh, you guys are amazing :)

[iveltac]

Nope just trying to spam someones stuff. :p

[Cool Girl]

Lol
SPAMMING!!!

Crhhyvrbgngbrbrbrbdbfdsadajshs ssgnshosgsndhxjshahsjehebdhdhdhdbdhdn

[iveltac]

Yeah this party just got started. HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOJOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Dancing like were prancing while were enhancing our gear.

[Cool Girl]

Lol

Nice rhymes xD

IT'S FUN TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!'mmmm

[iveltac]

:p your a poet and you didnt even know. LOLLLLLL

Hop while you shop till your wallet pops then youll be mopping for grub from a guy named bub. :p

[Cool Girl]

Lol


The guy named Bub has a pretty cool tub, and he likes to rub and scrub off the baby bear cub.

Lol

[iveltac]

Lol awsome rap. Thats what im talking about.

I'm talking while walking and stalking some kid whos tim hawkins.

Coolgirl was a girl who liked to turn into swirls that looked like pearls while riding around on a squireel. :p not sure if i said that right.

[Cool Girl]

Lol
This is hilarious

I do indeed like to ride on squirrels!!
How did you know that?
#Stalker

Iveltac was a guy who wasn't very shy, but ate so much pie that he began to fly!

[iveltac]

:p lol urs make since. Dan was the man and ate lots of ham that was until one day he got ran over by a van. lol

[Cool Girl]

That actually makes sense!
I'm proud of you!

The evil doctor crashed the car, but sadly he didn't turn into tar..

[iveltac]

:p the car was at a bar and then went to mars that was so weird until he was turned into lard.

[Cool Girl]

Lol xD

We have over 300 messages on here...

Dan is missing out, so Cool Girl started to pout.

[iveltac]

Dont pout or you will surely sprout on your mount.

[Cool Girl]

What the heck was that?!? Lol

[iveltac]

I dont know something awsome like a possom with suacumnish.