Short&Sweet

Not so sure.

its a mess when the skies mix with the oceans

 a rainfall splattering an anguish of emotions

thunder & lightning slice through the soft skin

sinking their grasps beneath bleeding out sin

And all the while the waves keep beating

the moon and the sun in a battle competeing

Author's Note

Again, sorry for no punctuation.

Reviews

[Ronn Michael Salinas]

yup it's a mess without punctuation. i strongly advise that you get it in there! don't worry, it would still be short&sweet! peace

[Daniielle7]

thank you both! :)

[*Private Person*]

I enjoyed this write, found it deep and intriguing!

[TJ]

It's quite interesting. Very metaphorical of peoples emotions. I like it.