Temptation

Temptation

A Poem by Daniielle7

my soul is sore, baring the pain of my sin
but your touch soothes the burns within
yet the affliction of good and evil persists
the tangle of temptation one must resist
the raw soul to soul interlace of perfection
continues to mirror both souls reflection
the severity of the beauty will never perish
when one holds all the other has to cherish

© 2010 Daniielle7


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you mean to say "bearing", right? the tone is split in two, from involved to detached/didactic. how about changing "one" to "I" or "you"?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece reflects the price of being human!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great insight... love this one

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Daniielle7
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I tend to reach for the stars, for lack of better words. My hopes are too high and my dreams are too big according to societal ways. And if there is one thing I've learned throughout my life it's not .. more..

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