My Venus

My Venus

A Poem by Danny J.H.

i wrote this for my girlfriend....<3 Monica


Thou art my Venus

Mine goddess of love

You share with me to live

And to die here that of


You are my darling

My heavenly gift

An answer to prayer

That cometh so swift


I cry out to you

And you cry back to me

Tears filled with sad

Tears filled with glee


My heart to you

Locked in a chest

Forever may you keep it

And keep it your best

© 2010 Danny J.H.

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wow you have an amazing talent and being so young! its amazing!

Posted 14 Years Ago

That was very beautiful and well written. Great read :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

great job

Posted 14 Years Ago

I am impressed...these words coming from a
13 year old:). This is a cute poem, but so mature.
These last lines are my favorite: My heart to you
Locked in a chest
Forever may you keep it
And keep it your best
....and so the bond is sealed.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Aww, such a sweet poem with so much love. I really enjoyed this piece and I must say I'm impressed. I liked the ABCB rhyming pattern for each stanza. Nice and swift.

Posted 14 Years Ago

this is very sweet and beautiful. i really love the flow and message you created through this piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Posted 14 Years Ago

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7 Reviews
Added on January 27, 2010
Last Updated on February 3, 2010
Tags: my, venus, love, poem, girlfriend, romantic


Danny J.H.
Danny J.H.

Dunwoody, GA

Hey! My name is danny, i'm 13 years old and i am a very avid poet. more..


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