Pain

By Ashley

It's screaming in my chest. 

I can't breathe. 

I feel like I'm going to get sick.

My heart feels as if it's stopped. 

Tears flow. 

And I know the reason. 

But I can't bring myself to say anything. 

Because I know. 

It's pointless. 

Talking. 

Will get me no where. 

This time. 

No matter what you say. 

Nothing can fix this... 

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

It's a true pain of your heart......!
i felt this pain, you know what you well said, no one can fix heart again if anyone break it...because pain is that hurt which destroys always our heart....i liked this writing' much...

i want to write on this topic as well....!
lovely write, you know what i felt yur pain here in this phrase much
Tears flow.
And I know the reason.
But I can't bring myself to say anything.......

tears flow but we don't get some words to say anything, because tears are our pain and pain becomes out heart that hurts in our heart.............
lovely write....pain...pain..n just pain in you........
you've got real pain.....you've got the exact meanin' of pain.........
you knew the worth of pain.......
why it's important in our life......from where it's arise.......


well penned, have this from me 106/100 :)
take care :)

[Kitten]

Thank yew.

[Criss ;)]

My pleasure, this's a deep write i can feel it, but i think you got hurt fro someone much...isn't it...?

[Kitten]

Yeah. That is the meaning behind the poem.

[Criss ;)]

yeah....i knew it, because i can feel your pain...you know what you just made it from heart of pain.......you got me by this writind....i love to read this....
soon, i'll read your more stuffsssssssss..............

[Kitten]

Thank yew.

[Rika]

its hard, i know but sometimes you dont have to say anything, as long as somone is thier for you, sometimes that makes it all better