dear lover

dear lover

A Poem by Shae-Leigh Johns

Dear Lover,
You once knew me
I was shy 
I was quiet
I was innocent
I was yours

Dear Lover,
You once knew me
You kept me on you strings
You said that you cared 
I was yours

Dear Lover,
You once knew me
I took a chance 
I stopped the dance
Nevermore 
I was yours 

© 2016 Shae-Leigh Johns


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I liked the repeated lines "You once knew me" and using "I was yours" showing that it had happened. It's in the past. It's a poem about the past to me.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Shae-Leigh Johns

7 Years Ago

It is a poem about the past, and yeah I wanted to bring that point across.

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 Added on December 6, 2016
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Shae-Leigh Johns
Shae-Leigh Johns

Mansfield, PA



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