Her Highness of Hurt Hearts

She smiles and walks along.

Singing her song, a very sad song.

It flows from her lips,

and evermore drips,

its sadness onto the world's strong.

They cower from the sorrows they've heard

because the rest of the world has become blurred.

They've grown with too much power

and lived among all flowers

so that now they're spirits are slurred.

What on earth can she do when all they,

the people who spend every day

living and singing,

their songs ever bringing

fake happiness, do never stay?

It's a long road that she walks all alone,

kicking solemnly down the street a stone.

But she will never give in

to all the reckless livin'

because the world of pain is her thorny throne.

There's a beauty in the pain that she fears

and even though it won't last for many years,

she knows that its worth it,

though all the pain to unearth it

will result in a life full of tears.

Author's Note

This is something new, and I don't know how good it is but it's the first time I've tried it.

Reviews

[Ada]

"There's a beauty in the pain that she fears-"
This part of that line made me really feel how this girl was feeling and how
people viewed her.

[Not here]

thanks :) i appreciate the feedback

[Thesecuts]

This has perfect rhythm, and I loved it :) keep it up, i'm really looking forward to more of your writing pieces.

[Not here]

right back at ya :)

[Riley Justine]

First of all, I absolutwly adore the title. Very creative.
Second, something new!!! Yes!
This is an awesome piece, you did really well with this new style you took on this time.
Amazing job!

[Not here]

thanks :) im gonna try this one again soon

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and true story in the words.
"There's a beauty in the pain that she fears
and even though it won't last for many years,
she knows that its worth it"
It is sad it seem. We will know sadness for every pleasure received. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Not here]

thank you for reading :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Different from your usual style, but definitely a very lovely experimentation. Melancholy, painful in emotions. Flowing structure, classical feel to it. I like!

[JayceeC]

I like the structure which is almost classical. It works to allow rhyme even internal rhyme scheme.

[Marcel Grant]

Yeah I like the new style a lot. Good poem, and though different from your norm, it's good that you mixed it up. As always descriptions are amazing. >>

[Not here]

thank you :) i appreciate the reviews youve been giving lately

[Marcel Grant]

I appreciate the poetry and stories! c:

[Saddam]

It is nice job.
Great read friend.
Send me more like this art.

[Not here]

okay :) i do like writing in this style

[Willard Wells]

I like the way you structured it and it flows well. I have read it a number of times and I like it, but it leaves me trying to find a way to express my view of it and I am not having much luck. Thanks for sharing.

[Not here]

its okay :) thanks for reviewing

[Melinda McQueen]

I agree with Emily, you should write more like this.
It's strong and power, gripping the reader's attention.
Well done.