In Ten Words

Hold her tight.

Be her light.

Love her right.

Forever

Author's Note

For the ten word poetry contest that Amy. R created. If you haven't, join in!!

Reviews

[Emily]

I really like it!!
Keep it up!!

[Not here]

thanks emily :) always glad to see ur reviews

[Sunny]

This is great Dante, Don't ever stop writing!

[Not here]

i wont :) thank you

[KittyKatgirl]

Omg this is really good. And so sweet. Whoever this poem is for she is a truly lucky :)

[Not here]

thanks crystal :) im glad you think so

[Stan Lee]

Nice poem Dante. Sounds like true love. 'She' is a lucky girl :)

[Not here]

thanks smiley face :) i apprecaite it

[Nightfeather]

Your poem may be short but it does not lack any emotions, for you have converted your emotions in words.

Good job :D

[Not here]

thank you nightfeather :)

[Nightfeather]

No problem :)

[Amy R]

simplicity at it finest....

[Not here]

thanks :) ten words is hard lol

[Amy R]

hahah, indeed it is, ur welcome....