Everytime I see you

1)Blue Eye'd 2)Dance 3)This one Order they are in

Everytime I see you,

My heart does its on little tango,

As I stutter and look down at my shoe.

Everytime you walk throught that door,

I know what I am feeling is true,

So when my heart beat reverbates through the floor,

I know what I am going to do.

As I am nervous to the very core,

and I am sweating Like I have the flu,

To you whom I adore,

You as pure as your virtue,

I stop and think about the factors I i had chosen to ignore.

What is my Value?

Do you think I am ugly, stupid, or a bore?

Not funny, Not Cute, or worse, not worthy to pursue?

 

 

But as you walk up to me and say hello,

I know not to doubt,

With those those Blue eye's

 

That it's meant to be

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I ran out of Ideas in the end.Sorry!Ignore spelling

Reviews

[The Skybreaker]

wait, i reread it, and i think in the line "You as pure as your virtue" needs a comma after you. in poetry, punctuation isnt the same as in regular writing . it determines how the poem sounds . different kinds of punctuation make you pause for a different amount of time . a period, exclamation point, ar question mark pause for 2 beats, and for a comma or semicolon pause for one beat . if there isn't any punctuation, dont pause at the end of a line . so with the comma it would read "You, (pause) as pure as your virtue" much better .

[The Skybreaker]

U just get better and better best friend !! i love that you mention her blue eyes in each one . its melodic and sweet . The line, i stop and think about the factors i had chosen to ignore" is kinda long . it could use some polishing . but good write !!