Made of Brass

A tiny, brass bell,

In the mid of night,

Gave off the loudest of alarms.

Those it awoke from their

Blissful sleep

Complained of its noise.

A tiny, brass bell,

In the mid of night,

Gave off the loudest of alarms.

Those it warned

Of the continuous war

Were thankful for its sound.

Author's Note

A poem I wrote as a bit of a challenge for myself ;)

Reviews

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I love how witty this piece is ,Devon. Your use of repetition and short lines really packs an impact for your piece. I love the line"Those it warned
Of the continuous war Were thankful for its sound." Great job, and thank you for your read request.
-Cord

[devon]

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! :) By the way, is your first name really Cord? If so, that's so awesome!!

[MandaBear]

Well I think you met and exceeded whatever challenge you set for your self. Great 100%

[devon]

Thank you so much!!!

[Beck Louise]

Short but really effective, you write with such eloquence :) nice work :)

[devon]

Thank you very much for your kind words! :)

[Annabelle Lee]

its nice you decide to challenge yourself, push your creative limits. And you do it so well! bravo!

[devon]

Thank you, again :)

[Sir Jaykom]

Short and very nice. Good work.

[devon]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the photo and the poem. Funny how some sounds can mean different things. I enjoyed your description of the sound. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[devon]

Thank you, again! :)

[Author Rucha Joshi]

Wow! I'm speechless! please want to read most of your work!

[devon]

Thank you!! And there's plenty of it, if you really want to read more. :)

[River Page]

So, when I read this I think of Paul Revere. Don't really know why, consiering there is no bell involved in that story. Lol. Anyway, I think its awsome that you can write about random objects. :)

[devon]

Aw, thank you! :)

[Mir]

Simple but I marvelous! :)

[devon]

Thank you so much! You're always too kind, doll!

[Mir]

Pssh You can Never be too kind!! :D

[devon]

True, true!

[morgann <3]

omggg its soooo amazing

[devon]

Thank you!