if i were not superman...

.hopes.dreams.realities.life.

if i were not superman...
i could never make any difference.

if i were not superman...
i could never make you believe (that a man could fly);

if i were not superman...
i'd not be the hope to all.

if i were not superman...
i could never save this world.

if i were not superman...
i'd not hold the good for always.

if i were not superman...
i could never fight for truth and justice.

if i were not superman...
i could never get the sky.

if i were not superman...
i could never made you look so high.

if i were not superman...

you'd never know i'd even existed

if i were not superman...
oh...if i were not superman...

yes..if i were not superman...

i'd be what i am!

Reviews

[KayOss]

Once again, you have done a wonderful job in getting your message across. When using repetition, artists walk a fine line between unnecessary redundancy and emphasizing a point. You walk that line like a skilled tightrope artist, emphasizing your point without being annoying or redundant. I like the ending as well: a nice, succinct ending to a nice work. It has a good flow and is quite easy to read.