Unlike Always...

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this time

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i died of death

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Reviews

[jen -- JG]

I do like this one - it speaks of so many other ways people die, without actually passing away, and yet they survive to go on and die again from something else.

here your statement is bold, cold and true.

this time no reprieve

THIS time Death killed me.


On a different note - a suggestion

by using your first line as a title only

the following six words would fit a six word poem...

may be worth a thought.

really liked this one

well done

jen-JG

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Different! Kind of sad. Very powerful words. This could mean so many different things. Nice work!

[Kara Emily Krantz]

so unique. tossed my mind in a million different directions, reminding me of the pain of the million-deaths we experience throughout our lives.

it almost made me feel... relief...

:) great job

[Jofer Serapio]

Another tragedy? I'm stumped. This day had me reviewing tragic poems. This one was short but it was also to the point. Direct and very well played. Keep up the good work.