Then there was you...

A thing to get out some emotions once more...

Someone up there please,

listen to me...

Why can I not appease,

Why can't I help him see?

I only said the truth, 

we love him very much.

Right now I play the sleuth,

and look to find a crutch. 

If you believe that something happened then it will be so.

I wish that you could see this truth before I go. 

But no...

Go away, run in fear of truth. 

You will do this until the heart refuses to go on. 

Love you forever but you're
driving me insane

Too many lovers in one lifetime
ain't good for you...

I'm the woman who loves you inside and out, 

backwards and forwards with my heart hanging out. 

...Too many heartaches in one

lifetime isn't good for me...

Don't you try to tell me it's all over!

I can't hear a lie

No girl could love you more...

And that's what I'm crying for...

...You can't change the way I feel inside...

"no matter how you hurt me 

I will love you till I die"

Love for friends...

Love for ex's...

Love for family...

Love for Love...

Love for your passion...

Why is there only one word to describe these different feelings...

If you want to cast me out...

Then I suppose I'll go...

I won't let you pout, 

but this I'll let you know.

This won't be easy for you...

Please don't see me as the demon here... because I'm just as confused as you are. 

We are both in the same erratic boat, 

hoping that someday it'll stay afloat. 

I'm not turning your friends against you, 

I'm trying to get them to help you. 

Everyone needs a hand every once in a while. We can't hold the world on our shoulders like Atlas. We shouldn't be punished like him either!

We are just so weak, we are just so pitiful. 

Humans will seek... Humans are quizzical...

So my old love, my old friend...

Learn the Hard way...

You chose to learn that fate for yourself.

But I hope that you will always remember...

I love you Lafayette

and I'm sorry

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Author's Note

Goodbye

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

This was deep and honest in its raw emotion. The desperation of the writer bleeds through the words, and the feeling of anguished torment layered over the fear of loss is always a powerful force in any human heart. Beautifully expressed and written. Nice work :))

[TJ]

this was a very beautiful poem...expressing the plight of seeing one you love try to move on to someone who is less deserviing of them than you. lots of emotion in this one! i feel the pain in it and the longing...good work

[La3uren]

Wow.Great peice. I cant imagine how long this would have taken, and its amazing.

[Forest Green]

thoughts in search of completion...a clean, final line, expressing the ultimate insight into why such hazards occur...in life.

steel