One More

Another Acrostic poem. Forgot to add one of the most important people in my life. This is for him.

Led me into a new world

Accidentally found a role

Forget the moment I curled

Anger will take it's toll

You always knew how to forgive

Even among the grind

Time for you to live

Time for you to find

Earnestly I await to see you grow

Your battles will be over

On top of the world you will stand

Underlings will smile

Not feeling a hint of hatred

Go on my brother, my soul, my friend

Reviews

[s y e]

This was good! Well done! (:

[Christopher Booyakasha]

that's was really good. i really like that last part. it was put together well.

[Stanley Wilson]

love the flow style and content good read

[Kaylor Mason]

Acrostics were always one thing I was never good at, which is why I think this is really fantastic! Lafayette Young sounds like a lucky guy--cool name, too, by the way :)

[Winter of '97]

Amazing. Great work. Love your style! (: