No Crutch, Just Love

 

If only my heart could melt

into the cracks caused

by lifetime breaks in yours.

Then no gap would exist

to keep you out of arms reach.

Make no mistake,

I do not want to part

the red sea for you,

just see you be able

to walk across it

using the power

of your confidence.

Then when we touch

our feelings will be authentic,

While your self esteem

becomes worth its weight in gold

so you and I can be individuals

while living our lives as one.

Reviews

[Renée]

This is a perfect description of how it should be ! Two becoming One ! Great One Cowboy !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you :)

[Lisa Ring]

That is true love. Wishing wholeness for your love rather than encouraging and perpetuating their weakness so that they will NEED you, shows integrity. Excellent.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much young lady.

[Mia]

I hate it when people say "better half". I don’t want half of you and half of me to make a whole. Two is always better than one. ALWAYS! Reading this and randomly shouting YES! because I'm excited that you write such lovely stuff and about such meaningful things. Too much awesome for one person!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much... I blush at your flattery.

[MOON]

Beautiful write to want the best for someone and see them flourish as an equal. lovely.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[marlayesterday]

You put into words what one would have trouble saying. To me, that is love. To want the best for that person, in who they are. Lovely.

[Pax]

emotionally lovely. great write.

[Kenneth The Poet]

When it comes to love and emotion, I think you are one of the clearest voices out there. You don't mince words, your meanings and subtleties are straightforward. Yet, you manage to bring out poetic feeling that somebody like me could never attain. Nice work, Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[Priya]

Sigh, I wonder if anyone would tell me quite anything like this in my lifetime. This is undeniably beautiful :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much... someone who truly appreciates all that you are will. Then you know they are worthy of you.

[Priya]

:) Well, I have a lifetime to find out :P

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes you do, and never settle for less.

[Magdelena]

Sigh....... As always your words can melt the hardest of hearts. This was as beautiful as the goldest of sunshine.. You make all you bring forth tear a small piece of our hearts out and then push it back in with it beating more stronger than before..

Kathump!!!

Mags xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much sweet thing... your kind words make my heart race.

[Magdelena]

Then we are even my friend.. lol Finally... :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

" While your self esteem
becomes worth its weight in gold"

I guess you can't say it better to any woman.

This is so unique, and loveble! Thanks Dale, and dear Poet! and
My beautiful friend!

E.L.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Beautelisa... as always you are so sweet.

Lol I seem so sweet, but for many I'm a witch :D lol