Truth Be Told

cry for the senryu

 

The weeping willow

whips without feeling remorse

so says destiny.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Damn, this should be called Whomping Willow but JK Rowling already thought of that.

[Avocations of Amber]

I always thought of weeping willows as trees that really cried when I was just a little girl. A recent muse for one of my own new poems, I like this short and bittersweet reflection. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Lily Mae]

This is beautiful too.. I just love these pieces..xo

[KAOlmsted]

I often thought it was a weeping willow out of empathy for all of the naked behinds its branches have whipped ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Not that is a very profound thought.

[lee von cleef]

Leave that destiny chic alone ,next thing you know she will have you on all fours pulling a cart.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Who says she hasn't already? LOL

[Constance L. Hartwell]

This really spoke to me. Who knew ten little words could strike a deep cord within my heart. Lovely.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much... I believe that less words helps keep the mind uncluttered.

[Marie]

I can't think whether this is senyru or haiku...nature's imagry, also profound thought...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

A very good point indeed, technically depends on how you see it.

[Tree]

Willow trees are magic, as is this clever/ thought provoking piece. Well done, sir

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[LA Lorena]

I love willow trees! no tree more graceful.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Cool, glad I am not the only one who likes them.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Well done .. Very good !

Jazzy x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Jazzy xx

[J. J. Nightingale]

:)...... YRW XX