Lucy-fer

Inspired by a joking conversation I was having with friend about Charlie Brown And Lucy.

 

It just boggles my simple mind

How you continue be so unkind.

Getting in your unwarranted licks

By pulling the football away when I kick.

Undoubtedly messing with my esteem, no argument,

Maybe to increase your psychiatrist appointments.

So you found a way to make your business thrive

Not caring that you’re messing with human lives.

Just remember every bloody nickel you earn

Is another step towards where your soul will burn.

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

I like the idea of karma in this one. It's hard to admit but not all of us are nice people. Great poem and love that you used the Peanuts gang as inspiration.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well there are even lessons in cartoons, thank you very much for your thoughts.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think another psychiatrist would be worth 15 cents a session.

fun poem with a message.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

LMAO, very good point sir. Well they always say you get what you pay for

[Frieda P]

Ha Scooby doo waffles, sooooooooo cute...I doubt Lucy has given that much thought, and she's too cute to have to worry about her soul burning, genius, how did you think of this one?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

God knows, it just came to me, I was gonna make it funny when I started but it turned serious.. my mind works in mysterious ways that even I don't understand.

[Relic]

haha, I remember this episode quite well. Lucy's soul is going to burn for a lot of things she did. :) Nice write.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir, see there are lessons and inspirations in even cartoons

[Relic]

So true. You're welcome.