The Place I Want To Roam For Life

They say the eyes are the window

To the soul,

But with a poet their words

Are the way into their heartland.

Line by line

Verse by verse

I could feel the pain,

In awe of your strength,

Completely taken

By the boldness of passion,

So charmed by the wit you possess.

I don’t deny the acre in your words

Has a few dried weeds, but then who’s doesn’t,

And few bones buried very deep,

All in all your spiritual ground

Has become my field of dreams.

What really won me over

Was getting to see

The part of your property

Usual marked no trespassing,

Trusting me to not share

The pictures of your life

That are never seen

But I was privileged to see,

Is the very reason

I never what to leave.

Reviews

[KWP]

Hey You ... loving this :)

There is something very familiar in your words ....

It's really lovely xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so very much. that was so kind of you to say.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Lovely poem! It can easily be interpreted as a love poem as well. It's a deep one too- knowing a poet requires requires knowing his/her undertones (aka personal facts) in literary works.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you very much, yes it is a love poem for sure.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

You're welcome. It's a unique love poem imho.

[Jennie Baron]

How insightful and clever, mon ami! You know what? I'm going to save this in my favorites.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh wow thank you, being added to your favorites is the highest compliment.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is beautiful Cowboy Dale Romantic and sweet my friend :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe thank you, I always admit I am a hopeless romantic.

[Vidya Bacchus]

I see that.You are welcome :)

[s y e]

Awh this is simply stunning and eloquently written Dale. You have a heart filled with love and you're going to make the ladies swoon for you. Lovely little dirty indeed. Very romantic.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you sweet Sye, but I only really want on lady swooning for me, LOL

[one sky]

I never *want to leave.
This is awesome, sir. A love one's heart is always a beautiful place to stay

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

It most certainly is, thank you :)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Now there is that heart of gold I know... simply a beautiful write Cowboy, You truly have a kind and wonderful heart to be able to see into a persons soul and like them for who they are...weeds and all! lol Awesome work. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much, I am glad you enjoyed that poem… I try to have a heart of gold but on occasion a rock from the gutter rears its ugly head. LOL