Wishing Well

Somebody stop me, the hopeless romantic in me is on the loose.

 

I wish to breathe

You in

Until I fully comprehend

The meaning of floating

On cloud nine.

 

I wish to taste

Your skin

So I can truly know

What makes life

So very sweet.

 

I wish to kiss

Your lips

So you can believe

In how passionate I am

Towards you

Being my lifeline.

 

I wish to make your

Heartbeat faster

So we can run away

From all the pain of life

And be each other’s

Pillar of strength.

 

Reviews

[B.J]

Such romantic work brilliantly said and penned

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you ever so kindly.

[B.J]

your welcome

[Madalyn Beck]

You are truly a hopeless romantic! This is stunning. I really enjoyed this piece. Oh those wishing wells keeping our wishes in hushed echos. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, yes I am a hopeless romantic and proud of it… one day this poem will be a reality. I keep the faith

[Simran Kewlani]

Hey, this is a really good one. *Hopeless Romantic*
Why are you going to the doctor? What kind of procedure?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes I am and proud of it, thank you.

Shock my heart back into normal rhythm. I had two valves replaced in January.

[Simran Kewlani]

S**t. Why?

[poetdoug]

You have a very colorful way with words.
Thanks for this lovely romantic poem for us all to enjoy

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much,,, I am just a hopeless romantic.

[s y e]

Ah you've written a beautiful romantic piece here Dale. Some beautiful thoughts you've penned and a lovely romantic, sweet poem. You're quite the romantic.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks again Sye, I am a hopeless romantic with a bad boy side.

[Fran Marie]

A sweet passionate piece, so tenderly rendered..good stuff..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Fran :)

[Bright Ocean Star]

Cowboy, she's a lucky lady. Most men would not be able to think these thoughts much less pen them down in such a beautiful arrangement. You have a wonderful way with words, my friend...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you, as I always say I am a hopeless romantic and I like it that way.

[redzone]

OHNO Mr. Cowboy is on the loose, romance and kisses and tickling skin are everywhere.. help us the world may actually be nice until he is captured and thrown back down that well.. wait, there he goes.. watch out KL ooops to late she is smiling... now see what you've done Dale.. LOL
And poor Ance, discomboobilated and defibrillated and also smiling... Dale, I think Jennie just ran by, hurry and you may still catch her... hey Cowboy, it's nice to see romance in the world.. thanks
~~redzone

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Hahaha your review made me laugh out loud… thank you.

[Matching Socks]

Dear Cowboy,

Your romantic words have really affected me.
You've made my heart stop for a moment to take it all in.
Would you mind passing the defibrillator?
It needs a jump start to get it going again.

Sincerely

X

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much, sorry bout stopping your heart.

[Matching Socks]

Did you notice how I asked for the defibrillator and not mouth to mouth? ;)

[Matching Socks]

I'm good now... Close call.