Last Call In Heaven

Last Call In Heaven

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

Demon rum

Feels so good

Going down

A virgin throat.

 

A two for one special

Makes it sinfully tempting

After a hard day

Of being gracefully appealing.

 

Continually being high

On the mighty one

Can make the blood too thick

To let the spirituality flow.

 

Their reason to party

Has biblical purpose,

Bringing balance between

 Cain and Abel’s influence.

 

When they announce

Last call in heaven

Angels know their purpose

Of getting mankind

Intoxicated on HIS love

Is how to repent a hangover.

© 2014 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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This can be read and taken pretty deep, especially when reading between the lines. You go into depth and really take this subject to a whole new level. Loved it all -- you knew I would though. :))

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much babe.
Intoxicated on HIS love
Is how to repent a hangover.

and the angels are right on target...best cure is the wake up call to guide you ...nice one Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

Thank you Fran, appreciate you taking the time to read and respond.
Umm, wow, like this, a lot to think about, and an interesting image.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, yes my mind comes up with things that even surprise me.
Haha! Very unique Cowboy.
Love it. I sure do.


Posted 9 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

Thank you, what can i say, my mind works in mysterious ways that even I don't understand.
Matching Socks

9 Years Ago

You're delightfully twisted.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

"Why thank you, thank you very much.", he replies in his best Elvis voice.
Laughing here, you are twisted and I love it....sounds like the best kind of hangover!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Frieda P

9 Years Ago

...but of course, all the best people are! :)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

I can't argue with that :)
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Cheers ;)
"balance between Cain and Abel's influence"

love it...yes, this is how to repent a hangover...get intoxicated on the right drink, take the right path
to heaven's bar.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

Well said my friend, well said… thank you sir for your insightful input.

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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