Write From The Heart

Inspired from a conversation in a review with a fellow writer, Alicia Schroeder.

When the heart bleeds

My pen will seep,

Emotions flowing

From every artery

Into one dark river of words.

 

When the heartbeats in rhythm

My pen will sing,

Serenading the power

Within the ballad

That love genuinely composes.

 

From heart breaks

To the heart racing

One thing will remain true,

I write whatever echoes off

The aortae’s chamber walls.

Reviews

[maria ( rose)]

Ditto !!
I absolutely love this poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much :)

[maria ( rose)]

you're welcome. :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Love makes us go crazy. It controls our mind, heart and mainly our emotions. We tend to make decisions based on that fact so that we do not lose our loved ones.
Nice one, Cowboy. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

When the heart rules the mind, one look and love is blind.

[Matching Socks]

I tend to think, over think love. The heart knows best though.
Nice job. I think mine is defective maybe, it's been broken too many times.
I can't even call it gently used.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh God I tend to over think things too, the quickest way to ruin a relationship.

[David Scott]

"To thine own self be true" or something like it... I think Shakespeare gets credit for this quote.
Yes, all we can do is capture the echo of our heart and pen it into poetic expressions.
You are authentic to this credo.
Great write Dale!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes I do believe that is Shakespeare… thank you, from the heart is the only way I know.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

truly Brilliant I love the heart it is
a Beautiful Organ :)



My Favorite stanza's lines here.




When the heartbeats in rhythm

My pen will sing,

Serenading the power

Within the ballad

That love genuinely composes.



From heart breaks

To the heart racing

One thing will remain true,

I write whatever echoes off

The aortae’s chamber walls.


Going into my favorites.



Thank you for sharing and for
your kind review and comments
you left on my page.


Blessings. Benita

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank so much, I am honored you favored it. Blessing be to you.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome. :)

[Brianna Brie]

Wow...the brain is amazing for its creative ability, but the heart, well the heart, out of it flows all of life's woes and wonders. Great read!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Amen to that Brie, thank you so much.

[Rita L. Sev]

A testament to the Poet's heart being the real Muse. May your pen keep singing to the rhythm of your heart, Dale! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe shucks, thanks Rita… I always say,"If you need inspiration look no further than your heart."

[Lyn Anderson]

This is really neat. Well done, my friend.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you ever so kindly :))

[Konigin]

WOW
Stunning. Beautiful. Sweet. Charming. Echoing. Chills (good ones).
I love it Dale. It sang to me and I kept rereading it! It really was spectacular my friend!
^.^

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you so much young lady, now I am blushing.

[Konigin]

You are so very welcome my dear. :) I am sure the red shade looks adorable!! haha

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a true poet writes what echoes off those walls, and you are one my friend.

nicely constructed piece here...with such gentle sentiment that we can all relate to.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you sir… you are one of the greats too.