The Real Victory

a senryu

 

Nice guys finish last,

And that is just fine with me,

It’s more rewarding. 

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

The foibles of guys. Good enough for me. Senryu should be about the foibles of man and that's what you've got. I think they finish last because they care enough to take their time.

If you want to get particular about it the Japanese poetry like haiku and senryu should have no capitals or punctuation.

[Patricia Wedel]

I follow my Dreams of Arabian Nights … and Pillow Fights…. tenderly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

words to the wise
coming in last May
be more rewarding than one
might think..short poem
sweet and direct..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you fran

[Temperance]

Nice guys finish last…So I’ve heard. If one waits long enough the cream will rise to the top so, the best comes to those who wait.

[Chris Shaw]

Such alot of truth here. Often the barsteward gets the girl. I've watched alot of movies Dale :)

Chris

[Patricia]

So very true! Personally I never compete with others only with myself.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

so do I. thanks Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yeah, a lot of times the consolation prize is better than the winner's trophy...

"If you can't be with the one you love, love the one you're with"----

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

exactly Jacob. thank you