All Weather

a haiku of life

 

Sun, rain, snow or hail

The weather’s always perfect

Through my rising breath

 

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

I see you sitting back in a lawn chair perhaps or just lying on the earth itself as the weather just falls all around you and your gazing up at it with your breath rising up to intermingle with the weather that is falling down. And sunshine shines down so it fits.

Fantastic job!

[WhiteWillow]

Refreshing to read someone who's grateful just to be alive.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Some one who got what I was really saying... thank you.

[Marie]

I'm glad you can enjoy all the weather.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Me too :)

[Dezaraye]

:-)

This made me smile. It's such a peaceful feeling, this little jewel.

[Kerry O'Connor]

A profound statement.

[Liza]

all throughout the weather changes - the air is there and we inhale - not seeing it but knowing its there...

[Poetic Beauty]

This is beautiful. I love most parts of nature. You can keep the snow part though lol

[J.Black]

I don't even like haiku's ... but I liked this. Why? I'm not too sure. Maybe because it has to do with the theme of life, mother nature and all her moods! Great!

[Sheila Kline]

It is good to embrace all aspects of the weather, and to accept it as perfect!
Nice Haiku of life!

[three]

not usually a fan of haiku, this one is good though because it reminded me of how weather associated with change of seasons brings inspires reminiscence and reflection. thanks

[Helena]

Beautiful flowing haiku. Loved it! ~ Helena