Rebel Heart(Romantic Soul)

A quick look within myself

 

I find no comforts

Conforming to the walls

That society built

Yet I feel right at home

Within the walls of love

That one woman built.

 

Guess I’m just a rebel at heart

With a romantic soul.

 

That is who I am,

Who I want to be,

How I will remain

For forever and a day.

Reviews

[Georgia Gypsy]

The image i see is that love is an open book, waiting for the pages to be written on with lovely words, beautiful moments, and no one can enclose them into man made walls---the mere existance of love between two people is soulful, spiritual, and eternal.
Wonderful glimpse into your heart.

[Ladysue]

I love this. An excellent beginning... oh, what love can do! A beautiful expressed piece...

[Stacey Watts]

Very well expressed. It is nice at times to look inside to see the things that inspire.

[closed account]

it's always great to write from the outside in, this was great!!!

[Ed Hart]

this works for me, brother...this works for me real good...

[Jenny Nelson]

Very nice write. Honest, open, to the point. Says a lot about who you are.
Wonderful opening stanza. I really like it a lot.

[Wicahpi]

Nothing wrong with being a rebel and a lover.
After all, conforming to what society would like,
simply doesn't make one happy. Love has that power.

[Gheeneil]

It's so tiring to live up to society's expectation. It always feels wonderful when we live a life which makes us happy and the one whom we offer each breath we take.

[Black Cat Fever]

Well, its really cool to know who you ARE! and who you love and that she is so very important to you.

[Ice QueenJen]

lovely tribute to an honest love!