The New U.S.A.

 

Mainstream worship

         Establishes

Pinpoint ignorance.

 

Marshal law changes

         Ignite

                  Hypocritical delays.

 

Cracked media mirror

         Distorts

                  Rightwing’s reflection.

 

Sophisticated self destruction

         From

                  God complex Government.

 

The USA

         Soon to be…

 

                  The Unidentifiable States of Armageddon.

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Well wow is this impressive~ You added it when i wasn't on this site so i missed this short and sweet gem. You are most likely right about this ..last line is great as is this verse...
"Cracked media mirror

Distorts

Rightwing’s reflection"

Very good i love it!

Chloe

[...]

. oh, very lethal and potent ... telling and compelling ... brilliant presentation ... what doesn't get to the soul gets to the eye ... in no time ... death by verse ... as my best buddy emmah frost would say ...

[emmajoy]

As a Brit I feel a little embarrassed to comment about the content .. but the way it's written says more than a thousand words .. you've near gone for the jugular!

[Tina Kline]

The tragedy of this is that it could so easily become true. I love the way you wrote this, you don't us any unnecessary words, it makes this more direct and start, getting the message across nicely and without clutter.

[Ferg]

strong and ominous!

[Seashell]

Actions speak so much louder than words....

Thanks for your views...I agree

Babsie xx

[Jenny Nelson]

Strong! Love it, especially that last line. I wonder what could be accomplished if the government ran the country instead of trying to run private lives and if Christians remembered that the highest law was love.

[Sheila Kline]

And the hot winds of change blow in with a ferocity that prepares the battle ground for the USA soon to be..........a lot of thought packed into your words!
Scary, but oh so much potential for reality!

[Fran Marie]

The USA
Soon to be…

The Unidentifiable States of Armageddon.



A power-packed write that tells it like it is The last line doesn't seem so far fetched either it can very well happen much sooner than we may think~ THINK your word again and you dio it well my friend

[Ladysue]

omg this is quite powerful. that last line stopped my breath...A very profound write that says so much about our world. Awesomely done...

[An owl on the moon]

Powerful, filled with a depth of philosophy about our present state and future demise. In poignant, pointed verses you say so much about the world.