A Whisper Of Wind

Just a little something

 

 

A whisper of wind

is nature expressing

the importance of humanity.

 

So stop the roar of gossip

and deafening selfishness

before a hurricane

becomes the only means to an end.

Reviews

[Georgia Gypsy]

Too often people wrap themselves up in gossip, and indeed cause a storm with their lies and falseness....it can be very ugly.
But your words make it sound like a softer event, and not quite so harsh. Perhaps with enough warning, people will cease to stir the storms up and be content in truth.
;)

[LeeLee Ryder]

Loved the title and great opening line ... Gossip definitely floats on the wind.. Too bad some gobble up the air and spit it's vile vomit into their social network ... Your summation that selfishness & gossip have a cruel alliance is right on! Good job, RNRC
LLR

[Wildfleour]

Gossip truly is a weed in the garden of life.

[Tina Kline]

Very nice. Love the message in this and the imagery you used to express that message. The positive message needs to be more than a whisper to be heard above the roar of the negativity all around us. That's what your poem spoke to me.

[Seashell]

Take heed...I say.
This is just so apt in some folks lives.....I don't DO gossip...no point whatsoever...therefore I love this WARNING...haaa

Great
Babs xxx

[Marie Harrison]

Very sound advice using the metaphors of nature. Very clever!

[Wicahpi]

I never thought of wind in this way, but
makes perfect sense. Simplistic, yet powerful
in it's message. Nice presentation :)

[just rose.]

Sustaining a powerful metaphor through a loud-and-clear wake up call. A brilliant aphorism.

[Ferg]

oh, but the thrill of a bit of juicy gossip!! (she said sarcastically!)
nice one!

[An owl on the moon]

There is a brilliant contrast you create with your flow here. The gentle whisper speaking peace... the roar of the hurricane bringing such destruction... Your metaphors speak loud and clear to a world that too often only wants to shout.

[Norma M Sutton]

A interesting idea.