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A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

A shining star heart

And Olympic torch passion

Simply cause of you.

© 2010 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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.quan.011.

Nice peom short and sweet

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An owl on the moon

Your words a profoundly chosen, each one filled with an emotional depth and beauty. With these three lines you truly share such a lifting expression of love and devotion.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Ang

I don't know much about haikus(spelling?) except that they are 3 lines long and I never really know how to review them...But I LOVE this! It's so sweet and in just 3 lines your passion and love for someone is so strongly written here. Great poem! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

Poetic Beauty

nice haiku. I love all three lines

Posted 13 Years Ago

Marie Harrison

Cool poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Helena

"A shooting star heart".....i like that line. Nice one Dale!

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jenny Nelson

That was great. So few words though they opened up the sky and the heart. Excellent!

Posted 13 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Erotic Goddess

Short and simple...love this!

xxoxx

Posted 13 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on September 29, 2010
Last Updated on September 30, 2010

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..