Karma Backlash

Had to get this out

 

Your tongue shined like silver,

How was I to know that was because

It was really a razor blade.

You used it with great precision

To cut the lies you tell

Thin enough to look like

The clear truth.

I do applaud your cunning nature

With great delight

In knowing that one day

That blade you live by

Will soon be your demise,

For that I will never cry.

 

Author's Note

It may sound very mean but there are some people who do not deserve compassion.

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

karma is a harsh mistress indeed~ clear~precise poetic that minces no words but presents them with a sharp blade~

[Wildfleour]

Dale, I just wrote a poem similar to this last night. I call it "Sugarcoat it, Sugar". I will post it soon, especially for you to see.

Sorry you fell prey to this, but the poem is terrific.

[The Analog Kid]

This is powerful. Nice imagery!

[Aidz]

Tastefully written, as my tongue slithered tasting the metallic flesh :)

[Fran Marie]

vent away .... a cutting , biting poem but yeah, I agree some people are just so mean spirited and hateful that they surely will reap bad karma to be surE!!