Say Whatcha Like

No need to read between the lines here.

 

 

If you say I am different

I would thank you for the compliment.

 

You remark, “That I do not fit in.”

My reply, “I don’t want to conform.”

 

You believe I am outspoken

I know I’m exercising my freedom of speech.

 

So shun me if you like

For I realize that you are

To ridged to understand

The concept of going against the grain.

 

Look at me with distain

I acknowledge it isn’t hate;

But fear of what lies

Beyond your little world.

 

Call me crazy for dancing in the rain

And I will feel sorry for your smile

Faded from too much sunlight.

 

Pronounce me a rebel

I will just wink and smile

With pride.

“You damn straight.”

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

Redneck Tuesday- hooya - love it, great poem love the pace and the flow -damn straight

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I think this should be a mantra for everyone..loved the message, the feel..freedom!

[Becky C Strukamp]

This struck a chord with me...how lovely to not conform...no one should sell their thoughts, wants, desires or character (flaws and all ) to another. We are all perfect in our own rights. YES!!! Love it!!

[Liza]

straight to the point; as if you're writing a letter to someone specifically in mind ~ the differences are all within us but the comfort of others is to influence to be like them ~ a constant tug of war and desperate need to feel like one belongs without stripping themselves of individual thought - a daily juggling act for most of us...

[WhiteWillow]

I love the message: "Take me or leave me, as I am." You spin it perfectly. This was an enjoyable read, thanks.

[Hayley]

You are really expressing yourself lately; I love it!

[Kat Wildd]

I love this one and totally agree!

[Abd-afeez]

hmmm! You've just shown a poet don't have to always be serious. A little humour won't hurt you know. Thats what i love most about this piece, its humorous approach made it an enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing this.

[Jamie S.]

I LOVE IT!! Catchy title, filled with pride and humor.

[joshua deathdealer]

Awesome!! This is awesome and defiantly to the point. Nice rhythm as well.