Open Heart

A senryu

 

Grey clouds can’t hide what

Lies beyond the sky with a

Heart like outer space.

 

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I Love, love, love this! A Brilliant Senryu!
The heart can be overwhelming...

Excellent! perfectly said. It's that way...

[Kenneth The Poet]

Man...you are the master of 5-7-5.

[Cassie Fraga]

truth dont move.... ooooooh how I understand... AWESOME piece!!!

[WhiteWillow]

Nothing can mask the truth. A beautiful piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

The words are true in this poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Again the feeling is awesome! short but a deep meaning!

[Tina Kline]

Wow, very impressive! I really like this.