The Never Ending Tunnel

Palewriter's poem "Then I Think Of You" got me to thinking and well this is the result...

 

You’ll forever live

Within my dreams

But just out of reach.

That’s okay cause

Reality has a way

Of turning fantasies

Into nightmares.

We all need to believe

In something we cannot reach.

For it is human nature

To taint the things we touch.

So that gleam in the distance

Can keep my life lit

When the truth blindfolds my faith.

Reviews

[The Random Writings Of ..]

This is beautiful in a way of its own. We do all need to believe in something we cannot reach and sometimes that can be scary, yet exciting at the same time. And tainting the things we touch is devastating in a way that is explainable. We live in a world that for some in full of heart break and love that is unreachable as you say. Your feelings of emotions are real to so many, including myself. A feeling of loneliness and emptiness. Well expressed and full of truth. Much love my friend.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much, you make some great points.

[Poetic Beauty]

So true so true. Dreams can be.sweet heartache. Know this feeling sometimes

[EmpressPoetess]

As long as we can dream we can have beauty.

[An Ordinary Woman]

something always just out of reach and then the joy of finally grabbing hold. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

True that... Thank you extraordinary woman.

[Bare trees]

Excellent job Dale. Who would have thought that one day I would inspire someone I respect and consider one of the best on WC. Awesome!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I am not one of the best... just someone who enjoys writing. It is great when writers can inspire one another.