A Natural Lesson

Haiku or senryu? How about Hairyu

 

Mother nature knows

that crying is essential

to the growth of things.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom in the words. Need tears from the clouds for the world to stay alive and strong. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[Seashell]

wonderfully said and so very true....
gonna shelf..xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Babsie... it was inspired by a pic I took that day. it is the last one in my photo album if you wanna see it.

[Seashell]

Course I do... Going there right now x

[Tree]

Simple. And profound. You can go in a few different directons, with this piece. Well done.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir for your thoughts and observation.

[Poetic Beauty]

Tears refresh the soul and cleanse it of all the negative emotions. This is a very real and true statement.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you PB.

[Poetic Beauty]

you are welcome

[SkinlessFrank]

yes, the soft rain

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Exactly

[Ed Hart]

teardrops keep falling on my head

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

and they keep falling

[LA Lorena]

this is a beautiful Haiku Dale. Now.....Hairyu? not a nice image.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I guess you are right... being too creative I guess.

[Marie]

I will have to call this a lovely haiku.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much

[Dream Mistress]

good