Merry-Go-Round

Just a haiku

Laughter echoes from

The spinning merry-go-round,

Innocence exists. 

Reviews

[April Child]

I like the sentiment but am wondering if the last line is meant to be "innocence exists" or "Innocents exist". Maybe thats the point... :)

[Miss Coral]

Ahh, very sweet piece. :)
I'm just wondering about the last line. Is it perhaps supposed to be "Innocence exists"? Or "Innocents exist"?

[Seashell]

I don't do haiku at all.....don't see the point.....ouch !!! This is nice though....but I would say that of your work anyway...

Thanks CB

Babs xxx

[emmajoy]

Beautifully created haiku, with your usual finesse, Dale .. tells a nice little story, brings back memories too.

Love merry-go-rounds!

[Wicahpi]

I'm thinking "Innocents exist"
and I'm remembering days spinning
on an old merry-go-round, laughing
with girlfriends as the boys would push
us faster and faster and faster....
that was then...today I'd ... well you know hahaha

[Brianna Brie]

It brings me down memory lane. As a child, I remember spending hours at the park. Beautiful haiku!

[Georgia Gypsy]

Lovely picture, in perfect form.;)

[Marie Harrison]

What a beautiful haiku. I can see it now.

[Ladysue]

Oh I love and adore this. It is music to my ears. Just beautiful and refreshing and inspiring...A fantastic haiku...