Crossing The Line

A senryu

 

The jester dances

Without even realizing

It is not his court.

Reviews

[Stacey Watts]

Very well thought out and insightful poem. Nicely done.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Very deliberate and insightful

[Bare trees]

People stick their noses into other people's business all the time don't they--when in fact they are nothing but fools with baseless humor or points of view. Nice and clever senryu Dale and to the point.

[Aravind]

Short and sweeeet!

As some are always hidden in their second personality, or just playing happy while they die inside... excellent Senryu Dale! x

[Liza]

so true....we can't make a joke of everything - especially when the crowd will not be penetrated and the speaker was not invited to influence.

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

hiya, long time no hear, this is a good poem, is it a senryu? I haven't taken the moment to check on such? anyways, I love it. the odds are on him, or her. Dancing is very representative and so is court. A reader can only grief on such, the heart is yours, mishel

[Jay Levon]

very good, and very true

[shultzfeather]

I've known a few damn jesters. They don't give a quack where they smack, court, field, a bar, a barn or my old lady's house. Annoying chaps at times. I wish a couple in mind would damn well stay in one court. Nice tight little poem i related. Way to go Cowboy.

[?]

hmmm somewhere he is not supposed to be...although he must be happy if he's dancin'..lol
lesson worth learning
Very nice