Our Love

Our lives are intertwined,

Like God giving us unbreakable binds.

Hold on for a little while,

Sit back and watch your life fly by.

We are meant to be together,

Just like birds and feathers.

You're as graceful as a dove,

And full of undying love.

Your embrace is full of care,

Our love is a deadly dare.

You are my life,

And very soon, my wife.

Reviews

[Toni Blackerby]

awww thats so sweet. p.s yall r so cute

[Bats In The Belfry]

Very Sweet Indeed!!!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Awwh, this is such a nice tribute for you and your girlfriend's obviously outstanding connection that you two share. It flows perfectly and ends with a picture of you two, which makes the readers say "Awhh" even more. Hehe. I like to know that they're are atleast some people out in this world that are happy with "love". Frankly, love's been horrible for me for the past two years or so. Maybe it's the jerks I've been with that's made it worse? Hmm, anyways back to your poem it's sweet and I hope you let her read it! Great job indeed, Anthony :D

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Tsukin Archangel]

oooo i love this so heartfelt and well written great poem

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

thank you

[Tsukin Archangel]

np :3

[Pencrafter]

This little poem HAD to be worth some extra points. Just keep those flowery words flowing as you both grow older.

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

Thank you. :)

[forevermore1218]

really nice man! I hope you and the lucky girl have a wonderful life together :)

keep up the good work

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

I told her this one, and she loved it. 2 thumbs up. One from me and one from her :)

[forevermore1218]

hehehe np. It always makes me happy to support relationships :) Thanks for responding to my comment

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

i read them and respond to them. Thank YOU for taking your time to review.

[forevermore1218]

always a pleasure. now stop going on poetry sights and go be with your boo! :)

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

Now that was funny. And I wish I could, but parent problems, and my brothers birthday is tomorrow... So i'm busy.

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

:(

[forevermore1218]

oh well. there's always time for love :)

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

You got that right.

[♪Barklight♪]

u 2 r awsome, best of luck ^_^

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

thank you

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

This is so sweet and amazing.
I wish the best for you two ^_^
100/100

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

thank you.

[afra]

good poem ...well done

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

thank you.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Aw that was so sweet and loving! :D Is the pic of you and her? Awesome job! I liked this poem alot!
God Bless!

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

yes it is

[Lost in Wonderland]

cool

[Lost in Wonderland]

she's pretty:)

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

thank you

[Lost in Wonderland]

no prob