Boredom

Boredom

A Poem by Dearantlers

What to do?

Don’t have a clue

Where to go?

I don’t know!

Who to see?

Don’t ask me

I need a life

Without much strife

Something to do

Something new

Need something more

‘Cause my life’s a bore

© 2014 Dearantlers


Author's Note

Dearantlers
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
My idea for this came from M.Dean. She told me to write about the struggles in my life, and in 2012, boredom was my main struggle. Haha, if only this could be my problem now... Thanks M.Dean!!
Any suggestions, criticism, whatever, would be awesome! Thanks again!

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I like this piece simply because that is exactly how i feel about my life, i can relate to it mainly the last line...
I need something more because my life's a bore, tell me about it.
You know a poem is great when people can relate to it, and when its written from the heart, this poem has both.
Well penned :)


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dearantlers

5 Years Ago

Thanks for taking the time to review!
cimmy wuv xxxooo

5 Years Ago

your very much welcome :)



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Very cool!!! Lol I've totally felt like this before too

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dearantlers

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing my poem!!
Ha, I've felt this way before. Great job.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dearantlers

5 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the review!
I like this piece simply because that is exactly how i feel about my life, i can relate to it mainly the last line...
I need something more because my life's a bore, tell me about it.
You know a poem is great when people can relate to it, and when its written from the heart, this poem has both.
Well penned :)


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dearantlers

5 Years Ago

Thanks for taking the time to review!
cimmy wuv xxxooo

5 Years Ago

your very much welcome :)
Nice poem, and your life is probably just as interesting as mine... which I guess mine can be pretty interesting at times (thank you little kids who love ending up in the E.R.!). Though one thing about the poem, honestly I'm less board when there's strife, I think that life would be dreadfully boring "Without much strife." But that's just me. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dearantlers

6 Years Ago

Haha! Thanks! I just wrote this this summer because I was had nothing to do. Then when school starte.. read more
LunarSong

6 Years Ago

Haha, you so should, and you should find a way to connect it to this poem :)
awesome!when i get bored i write short poems like this one.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the flow of this poem :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

like the poem, it has a nice rhythm to it. As for suggestions, lord, I wish I could be smitten with boredom! Get involved-volunteer-BE the CHANGE!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Something to do
Something new
That's exactly what I think every morning! :) 100/100

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple, but good poem. It has a song-like quality. A good book, show, or computer game have always curbed my boredom! hehe

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is awesome, and so relatable.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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