My Elusive Dreams

A pure white rose

A symbol of innocense

A whisper of love

My elusive dreams

If I could reach out

Across time and space

Touch your hand to mine

Feel your sweet embrace

Just one more time...

 

Reviews

[Imperfection]

The title attracted me to this piece because 'My Elusive Dreams' is one of my favorite songs. What I found here has become another favorite.

Excellent composition and beautiful picture to go with it.

[Seriana]

This is very lovely and soft. A nice look into the desire of a dream. Great write!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very sentimental and longing piece... brilliant display of emotions in those few lines.

[Lestat's daughter]

Very pretty. Nicely written, love the picture, nice choice of words, well structured. Keep writing!