Counting on.

Counting on.

A Poem by Deeksha

I'm counting on,
I'm counting days.
Since I last saw you,
Since we parted ways.

I'm praying for you,
To see you smile,
To feel your touch
Come back, be mine.

I feel the tears,
Trickle down,
I want you here,
I want you now.

It's hard enough,
To live each day,
Knowing that you left,
For far away.

I cannot survive,
With you gone,
No I can't,
It's been too long.

I'm holding fast,
Holding on,
For you, my dear,
I will be strong.

I'm counting on,
I'm counting days.
When I will see you,
See you again.

© 2010 Deeksha


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so beautiful... keep it up deeksha

Posted 11 Years Ago


This poem shows the longing of love gone away.
It's hard to be without one you love.
Thank you for your entries into my Poetry of Love contest!
Good Luck

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very nice ...very romantic...

Posted 11 Years Ago


ahh, the loss of love is a great topic for a poem, good emotion

Posted 11 Years Ago


love the flow of the words and emotions throughout the poem. great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm counting on,
I'm counting days.
Since I last saw you,
Since we parted ways.
Inferiority complex hit me hard :(

Posted 11 Years Ago



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