Bats

Bats

A Poem by Baby Ricochet

I pulled her pants off
Bats flew out her haunted chooch
The Moon drifted

© 2012 Baby Ricochet


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lol funny stuff! Scary too. Ha ha!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you
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tarantino-esq

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
your getting good with these haikus :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
Looool chooch in italian is a slang for idiot :p

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

I got the word chooch from my friend jade.
Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Jade was black, not Italian.
Destinyxi

11 Years Ago

Well in italian its a slang for idiot :p
Holy Cow!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Holy Bats!
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DrD
Vampire bats, no doubt.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Of course
Wow! Hopefully no guy ever says something like that about me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


haha, who'd have thought if the cobwebs didn't throw you off, level two had bats lurking around. Great stuff, was hilarious.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the review
the scariest haunted house known to man... ur lucky u walked away unscathed lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

That's for sure.
Sirius King

11 Years Ago

haha
You got the syllable count right this time, and I guess you got the spelling right, though I don't know the correct spelling of "chooch". Or if there is such a word.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

lmao ;D
Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you

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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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