The Last Poem

The Last Poem

A Poem by Baby Ricochet

This is the last poem I'll ever write
on my service to the corps
Sorry if you think I'm a total a*****e
But I can't do it anymore

I've got my reasons and rationals
No need to ask me why
It's just a decision I had to make
So kiss that part goodbye

I'm a US Marine Corps Veteran
and it's memorial day
A past I'm keeping to myself
So I got nothing to say

© 2013 Baby Ricochet


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maybe it is best to go with your gut for now and do what is right for your well being and peace of mind. i support you regardless of what you write, but i think that you know this. you have many genres of writing and many different styles at your disposal, being a many faceted writer with a gift for the written word...therefore, i see much possibility in your future for different and possibly new and exciting venues. this is a great piece in itself, but i think you were going for a statement more than a clever poem. still, well done, my friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

Thank you quinfinn



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Semper Fi... welcome home man.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

Semper fi Marine
Respect your decision and question nothing Ricochet, your stuff is great no matter what the subject, it can be a hooker or a current event or your past, I'm not gonna stop reading.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

Thank you Inda. i APPRECIATE YOUR SUPPORT
Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

Sorry. I hit the cap lock
What ever you say or don't say, I'll always listen.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

Thank you Saratoga
Anything you write will be good whether its about your past, your hoped for future or whatever just pops into your head. Just promise to keep putting out awesome stuff for us :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

thank you ankara
If your heart is telling you to stop, then go with it. :)
You have different styles of writing, and they're all incredibly good, you know you'll always be supported no matter what you write.
Salute Sir, lol
Nicely penned

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

Thank you girl
You have tried various styles of writing which also rich in content.
You were and you will always be a sweetheart among all our writer friends.
Do take a break & come here soon.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

thank you mary
nice rhyme scheme, and good content, well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

Thank you Rene
Salute! Ricochet.. Working hard for country and serving with love and honestly that what Army/Navy/Air Force etc they gain.
Love you last poem, they have some pain which I felt as always you do have material and create one master piece out of it.
You make people think and think and think. Even you word "A*****e" made sense totally.
You have brilliance and capture every single shutter with open eyes.
You guys have patience and have tolerance more than civilians and great at heart with whole respect indeed.

With love and respect,
Singh :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

Thank you Singh
Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

Welcome
Thank you so much for your service for this country.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

Thank you Emily
i truely believe, that one should always do, what the heart says
good that you agreed.....
well, one advice whenever your heart says pleeeeeease come back to writing..!!!
till then ;
take care
all the best
and the poem is really wonderful..!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

I'm still writing. Just not about this. Thank you Saumya
Saumya

8 Years Ago

great..!! :)
you are highly welcomed..!!

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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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