Some day senryu

One day

There may come a day
I can wash the blood away
But I don't know when

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfect, simple and thought provoking.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Thomas

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Your welcome BR.

[Troy Henson]

Such few words spoken revealing great depth and anguish.
Take care my friend.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you troy

[Pryde Foltz]

Oh Baby. You break my heart.

All I can offer is that you are in the company of multitudes and you are wise, empathetic and compassionate enough to know and admit your mistakes. And you work with your pen so others will not be led down the same path. Evil must be named before it can be defeated and you name it all the time. You went into the dark as one, so many will not have to.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Pryde

[Chris]

Damn Mark... you DID say it all man...yes, ya did.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Chris

[Rita L. Sev]

Like Lady MacBeth's "damned spot"... Some day, soon...

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Rita