The girl

Dating advice rhyme. I'm just glad it rhymes in most places

Confused by porn and loneliness 

Men lose it in a swirl 

When they can't tell the difference 

between p***y and the girl 

A girl's a vulnerable human being 

To some that's a surprise 

Stop lusting for that a*s so much 

and you might realize 

You wanna stand out from the pack 

you gotta earn her trust

You're not another p***y junkie 

and all you got is lust

Horn dogs are sniffing up her skirt

a hundred times a day 

She's cutting them off constantly 

So she can get away

You might just be another dog

who learned to bark some game 

or the man she's longing for 

Her heart your only aim 

She's gonna run her tests on you 

To see how you unfurl 

If you can tell the difference 

Between p***y and the girl 

She gives a little then pulls away

Gives you some runaround 

You lose your cool or turn lap dog

You'll lose her on this round 

Lay off the texts and messages

Give her some room to breath 

To much attention creeps her out 

A stalker she don't need 

Don't be so hot to tap that a*s 

You gotta hold back true 

You play this next round perfectly

She'll give it all to you 

It's two moves forward one move back 

She'll hold out to the end 

She's gotta know you won't use force 

On this her life depends 

Not such a crazy game she plays 

Her life and limb's at stake 

Run her course and jump her  hoops 

and then she knows it's safe 

Now you won the girl you wanted 

Your diamond and your pearl 

Cause you could tell the difference 

Between p***y and the girl 

Author's Note

There's a HUGE difference between her knowing she's safe with you and you being "safe"
Maybe for another poem. Christ, I don't know. I'm just glad I finally wrote a flipping rhyme . Yes we all know the title's really "Pussy and the Girl" but the word "pussy" would cost me readers.

Reviews

[Marie]

If I read something called "P***y and the Girl" 'd expect a poem about cats.

A lot of wome don't want a man who will jup hoops for them. A lot of women like danger--often to their regret. But never tink women can't take care of themselves.

[Baby Ricochet]

I haven't been with a women yet who didn't test me before she gave it up. Thanks marie

[Tai Ryens]

And once more, your author's note urges a chuckle on my part.
I never really did understand of some people; namely, those that objectify those they intend to pursue romantically. What really stood out was that those kinds of people aren't the only ones that you covered in this piece. Above all, the message you convey with this piece is quite clear: those that smother their lovers, even unintentionally, can potentially ruin their relationships.
I particularly liked the advice you give as well, "Two steps forward, one step back." That's Plato-level advice, right there. I'm going to write that on my wall.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks Tai

[Corset]

This is why you have a girl friend Mark :) just sayin'. I especially appreciated your opening line in your author's note..a huge, huge difference. glad to see you back in the saddle :)

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you Corset

[Relic]

I always listen to you very carefully when you write these kinds of poems Ric. You're honest and to the point which I like. I totally agree with this and I must say I was once like what you've described. elf-control and respect go a long way.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Relic

[Matching Socks]

Yeah, big difference...
Haha! This makes me laugh!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks kid

[Matching Socks]

Anytime baby.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, a major difference and a woman does not want to be just a physical commodity for a man, she wants to be respected as his equal partner, and thus should be treated as such.

i really like this one...you don't hold back, and it really works for you when you write.
your poems smack us in the eye and mind.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Jacob

[Chris]

Words to live with and yeah they even rhymed - go figure...

[Baby Ricochet]

LOL! Thanks Chris

[willweb]

This just about says it all BR. Wow, you have penned a truthful rhyming poetic masterpiece here in my opinion. A true relationship is so much more and it is my belief it begins with respect. Thank you for sharing this today. I'm saving this one.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks Willweb

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Divine darling, a perfect mix of comedy, message and great advice to all those "dogs" out there! fantastic flow also, well done, good read.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Thomas