Your Message

one message triggers so much

Your message ....

Brings thoughts of you

Dominates my mind

Overshadows all else

Images of bodies joining, intertwining

Drift across my vision

Memories of sensations

Are burned into my being

Feelings of pleasure, ecstasy

Surge in my mind

A connection,

a closeness,

 intensifying emotions,

every feeling,

every touch

every kiss and caress

Our essence

All honest, all raw,

Exposed and vulnerable

Yet safe in each other’s keeping

A trust

Reviews

[Mari' Emeraude]

A beautiful image of a relationship with the best of both worlds.

[denise]

Thank you - I love to capture feelings... as they are elusive

[Richard McLin]

Memories and sensations are burned into my being

Loved that line. Great job. A very great piece. Emotional, sexual, so many feelings, and all very well felt and described. A fantastic piece.
-Richard

[denise]

Thanks... I write for myself (compelled to really) but it's nice to know others can appreciate.

[Chris]

When voicemail is a keepsake... sigh.

[Lorry]

The message that begins an avalanche of thoughts and memories within us. Sometimes so strong we wo
Nder how the feelings ever left our thoughts.
Beautifully captured.

[denise]

Hope it reminded you of something/someone nice

[McEltic]

A trust worth keeping with good memories... enjoyed your thoughts here

[denise]

Thank you ... it's about good memories but also honesty and trust in each other