Tidal wave

Orbit. Sink into me.
A holistic remedy to a heart heavy with a firm resolve to disarray.
We are more alike than you think.
Bridges of apathy and progression.
I won't press.
I've sank into you.
Dived head first.
You became my lungs.
Allowed me to breathe.
Like masking tape you saw through me.
Transparent. Stubborn.
An unfinished equation.
The longer we continue the more my sight clears.
The longer we are together the more you mean to me.... My dear.

Reviews

[Eddie Phillips]

I enjoyed the aesthetic wording of your poem. You express your feelings for the tidal wave masterfully. The poem gives room for many interpretations and allows the reader to have an ambiguous metaphorical relationship with your work. It was a fun read and I really appreciate your skill in writing it.

[Mari' Emeraude]

Is someone hopelessly in love?? I think the longer people are together the love hopefully grows as well and it sounds like you have succumbed to this sweet emotion.

[Delmar Cooper]

Is your masking tape transparent? I gotta get me some of that stuff.

[Richard McLin]

Great and very honest piece of poetry. I LOVE the line "you became my lungs". Very romantic piece.
-Richard

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

To be lost inside one to share common ground is all we could wish for - deep connection bringing unity- lovely words🌹