where i belong

Thorns and thistles

Cuts and sniffles

Scratchs and tickles

           A quiet field

                                      Wind blowing

 my true emotions showing

Pitter patter

Chitter chatter

Squeaks and squeals

           A solemn wood

      I would stay here if I could

                Real life comes by                                            to bring me back

I can only dream of it

The thorns and thistles of a quiet field              and

The pitter patter of solemn woods

                           this is where I belong

 

 

 

Reviews

[Stripes]

This is very pretty. The rhythms are beautiful and I love the format.

[Jess Holden]

Great rhyme, and format. so amazing :D

[onceafaerietale]

I love this, it sounds so fairytale-like but has a beautiful rawness to it. Amazing, again