Dream Cafe

Dream Cafe

A Poem by Diana Owen Busy with Life BBS!

Pigs can fly with magical wings

while lynyrd skynyrd sings.

Monkeys jump from banana swings.

There are some of the crazy things,

that often dreams bring.

 

Brad Pitt nude only wearing a hat

holding a bag full of pink and blue cats.

Paris Hilton as she eats herself fat

indulges on tofu covered bats.

Now how werid is that?

 

Cows jumping over the moon,

while Johnny Depp eats cheese with a spoon,

and all the purple poines swoon,

ha well wouldn't you?

 

Santa flies in his chocolate sleigh,

through the Bucs game in Tampa Bay.

These are just some silly things that

people dream about ,

Here in Dream Cafe.

© 2008 Diana Owen Busy with Life BBS!


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Well your mind is well out there.lol

A great write....brought a great big smile to my face reading this!!!


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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I like the dream process, and how our mind works when we sleep. One said that dreams are the minds way of breaking down everything the mind had witnessed through out the day....I like that theory....

The pictures are perfect!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Can I have some of what you were having? This was quite funny and successful I think save for some areas where the rhymhe seemed a bit strained. Thanks for sharing. I could have lived without the vision of a naked Bradd Pitt though.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Made me think of the old Pink Floyd Album jacket with pigs flying over Battersea power station. Good work. I had a weird dream last night, too.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought it was great and I love the pics that you chose.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmmm well..I mean...as I write stories about fairies and to date I've included characters such as mermaids, speaking wolves, arguing chipmunks, leprechauns, greamlins and even a baby dragon...I don't think I should speak on how "out there" anyone elses mind can go lol. This was cute and a fun read....and...perhaps let a few of these silly ideas fly and see where they take you lol.

laura

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Your rythm and rhyme was great in this...though I didn't permit myself to ponder many of the visions...;)

Nice work; perhaps we should visit the cafe more often, are there any nights when the visions are ladies only?

(:o)

Thanks for the submission.

FG

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I had a bit of a problem with the first stanza - I struggled with it until leaving to enjoy the rest of the piece. There's much to enjoy here although I'm not overfussed with Mr Depp or Mr Pitt but I can stick in my replacements.........Would be funny to see a fat Paris! To be honest I was only remarking the other day how nice it would be to read some light hearted poetry so thank you for this. With dreams like these who cares about reality!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ok...what ever you having ..can I have some too? This was such fun.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This was a highly enjoyable read. And also somewhat funny.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This made me giggle! It's so full of wonderful and vivid imagery! It's funny the things that our minds can come up with - especially in our dreams.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Diana Owen Busy with Life BBS!
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I am a 36 year old married female.. My passion is to write. My genre is mostly in paranormal, paranormal romances and fantasy fiction. I have three wonderful children (Danyale 19- Josh 16 and Kymb.. more..

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